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18. Helio city– 3.2 JJ 18

　　本月原始

　　Corporations should look to the city of Helios as a new opportunity to start new business. In the recent recession, Helios maintained a lower unemployment rate among the region. What's more, it was the historical industrial center of the region, and it had created manufacturing jobs more than its shares of the region. In order to strengthen its economic base, Helios is now attempting to attract corporations with large expenses in research and development of innovatie technologies.(by goldenage)

　　考古原題

　　The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life.

　　“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.”

　　參考思路

　　1. 無根據(jù)假設(shè)：H是industrial center of the region不代表companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies will achieve in Helios.

　　2. 錯誤比較-時(shí)間縱向：錯誤的假設(shè)過去的成功能夠代表未來。比方說已經(jīng)飽和的資源、過分的競爭，以及可能出現(xiàn)的不利政策，都可能導(dǎo)致H地區(qū)的經(jīng)濟(jì)不再發(fā)達(dá)。

　　3. 因果關(guān)系：expand economic base也不能僅僅依靠attract companies.

　　4. 因?yàn)镠地區(qū)industrial and manufacturing比較attractive，所以那里的工人很可能只適合做這類的，如果缺乏能夠做innovative technologies and research的工人labor pool，那么很可能導(dǎo)致失敗。

　　5. H的低失業(yè)率更可能成為壞處，因?yàn)楸热缬衛(wèi)ess available work force，企業(yè)就必須提高wage才能吸引他們，從而提高了cost。

　　參考范文

　　In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is the industrial center of the region, providing most of the region’s manufacturing jobs and enjoying a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, efforts are currently underway to expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.

　　To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios could support all types of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, it’s unlikely that Helios will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus or research and development of innovative technologies.

　　Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will have to either attract new workers to Helios or pay the existing workers higher wages in order to lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies seeking to relocate.

　　In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking new business opportunities to choose Helios.

　　19.服裝公司– 3.4 JJ 19

　　本月原始

　　首先來說essay 一個(gè)financial analyst分析：一個(gè)做服裝的公司， 過去5年的sale in retail stores很好，所以他們想要多開125家店(反正100多，當(dāng)時(shí)就想，天!一下開100+店 能行么?)又說CEO 是rock star， 她的star power會很大程度上幫助sale。(by maimiki)

　　疑似考古

　　V1作文是說有一個(gè)financial analyst wrote a memo to the Investment Director. 因?yàn)橐粋�(gè)公司叫Crow Brand manufactures t-shirts, jeans which has become a hot trend in youth apparel. Right now, this company sells most of their products through various outlets. Moreover, its management team has very aggressive plan to open 125 stores in shopping malls. The financial analyst strongly recommend his clients buy Crow Brand's stock. Its CEO, who is a previous rock star, will also make this company a fashion.

　　參考思路

　　1.時(shí)地全等：該公司sale growth已經(jīng)持續(xù)了5年不能表示今年以及將來它會繼續(xù)增長。

　　2.錯誤類比：outlets和shopping malls的銷售模式和strategies不一樣，Crow Brand 通過various outlets去銷售它們的產(chǎn)品，而如果它們open 125 stores在shopping malls就不一定能保證它們的產(chǎn)品能給投資者帶來更好的收益了。

　　3.無端假設(shè)：CEO是Former rock star不代表她的products可以吸引眾多的消費(fèi)者來購買。因?yàn)橄�費(fèi)者不會關(guān)心她曾經(jīng)是不是rock star。

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