雅思寫作真題范文：line graph&教育類

雅思寫作小作文——Writing Task I
　　由于每個月的四次考試中總會涉及到line graph，今天我們就來講一講line graph題怎么寫， Line graph是典型的動態(tài)圖，需要掌握以下詞匯：
　　上升：go up  increase  rise  grow 下降：decline  decrease   drop  fall
　　波動：fluctuate  平穩(wěn)remain stable (steady ) at
　　經(jīng)歷某種變化：see experience witness(例：see an upward trend/experience a sharp increase)
　　達到最高點：peak at/reach its highest level at   落到最低點：fall to its lowest point /level at
　　急�。篠harp  rapid   dramatic  steep  顯著大幅：Noticeable  significant  Considerable  substantial
　　小幅：slight  持續(xù)：gradual  continuous   consistent

請掌握例文中的10個句型
　　例：The graph below shows the number of people at a London underground station from 6:00 to 22:00. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

1. It is clear from the line graph that the number of people using this station fluctuates significantly over the 16 hours.第一句話請注意一定要把主語交代清楚，不能只說the number of….
　　2. At 6am the number of people in the station stands at 100. 起點用stand at表示位于
　　3. Then the figure rises dramatically over the next 2 hours, peaking at 400. 動態(tài)圖請注意用then等連接手段
　　4. After that, the figure drops rapidly, reaching 180 at 10 am. 請注意用After that這個連接手段
　　5. The period between 10 o’clock and 12 o’clock experiences a slight rise in the number of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. 主語不僅可以用數(shù)值，也可用一段時間

6. The figure remains stable at just under 300 people over the following 2 hours. Following可改成 next
　　7. After that, the number of people in the station plunges to its lowest point of 90 by 4pm. 急劇跌落
　　8. The next 2 hours sees a sharp rise, with the number of people reaching 380 at 6am.
　　9. After 6 pm, the figure falls again.
　　10. the period from 8 pm to 10 pm experiences a slight rise, but finally the number of people in the station declines again, ending at 135 at 10pm. 結尾點一定要寫

注意line graph當中的main features：起點、終點、最高點、最低點。線圖的分段按照線的種類來分：幾條線或者幾種線就分幾段。

雅思寫作大作文——Writing Task II
　　10-12月兩月中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的話題還是教育類，因此重點還是要放在教育類，因為哪怕考題是犯罪類的最終也能回歸到教育類，所以給出一篇融合教育科技工作生活類的文章供同學們參考。

Advantage & disadvantage 范文
　　With the wide use of computers and the Internet, people can study and work from home without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
　　The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to study and work from home. When we enjoy the convenience and flexibility of this new pattern, its negative influence should also be noted. 第一句話是對題干所要討論現(xiàn)象的改寫，第二句話指出這個現(xiàn)象既有優(yōu)勢也劣勢。

Working from home enables employees to have a flexible schedule. As long as they can meet the deadline, they can choose any time in a day to do their work. In distance learning, the course content can be recorded and replayed, which means students can review it as many times as they want. The most attractive part is that employees and students do not need to travel to the company and the school every day, which saves them a great deal of time and energy. 主體段第一段寫優(yōu)勢，分別從三個角度切入：一。上班族獲得的益處；二。學生獲得的益處；三。遞進：上班族和學生共同獲得的益處。

However, this work pattern probably only suits some jobs that can be done on computer such as designing, accounting, translation, etc. Due to the lack of face to face communication, colleagues are likely to become alienated, which may affect their cooperation. Another problem is the relaxing environment at home. Without discipline and supervision, some employees may find it difficult to finish their tasks on time. In addition to this, the biggest concern is perhaps for students, whose education is not about learning information and acquiring knowledge only. When staying in school, students will learn how to interact with their peers, how to respect their teachers, how to obey school rules, etc. These elements are an indispensable part of education, but they will be missing in distance learning. 主體段第二段寫劣勢，前兩個分論點寫上班族；后一個深入寫了學生群體。

To sum up, learning and working via the Internet is a convenient way sand it is expected to become more popular in the future. However, we should take other factors into consideration when we decide to work or study from home. From my point of view, the disadvantages of working or studying online outweigh its advantages.前兩句話采用以退為進的方式，先承認這個趨勢的優(yōu)勢，轉折之后說出作者的顧慮。最后一句話水到渠成得出結論回應考官的提問： the disadvantages (drawbacks)of this outweigh its advantages(benefits).

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