本文為大家整理了雅思大作文結(jié)尾高分模板的講解,供考生們參考使用,這個(gè)雅思大作文結(jié)尾的高分模板的思路即將回顧全文部分省略,直接表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)和意圖。這種結(jié)尾方式比較適合于純單邊支持的作文,以下我們來看幾個(gè)例子:
It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the worldand it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But attempts should be made toredress the imbalance.
關(guān)于人才流失的話題,作者在結(jié)尾一上來就表達(dá)了自己的立場(chǎng),即無法阻止這個(gè)現(xiàn)象。但是進(jìn)而又對(duì)改變這個(gè)狀況做了期待。我們來對(duì)比另外一個(gè)例子:
All in all, the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone.Nations need to work together on long-term projects, sharing their knowledge andskills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.
在分析解決型題材的結(jié)尾中我們也可以采用這種2要素的結(jié)尾方式,如果最后所剩時(shí)間不是很充分的前提下,省略對(duì)全文的回顧而直接表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)也是一種明智的決定。
To conclude, it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforcehave increased, they are still disadvantaged because they generally put thewelfare of others, particularly the family, above financial ambition orpromotion.
上面例子中,我們發(fā)現(xiàn),其實(shí)展望未來這個(gè)部分,也可以寫成解釋原因,因?yàn)椴皇敲總(gè)題目到最后都能想出一個(gè)合適的未來讓你展望的,那么這個(gè)時(shí)候我們不妨把思路切換成對(duì)觀點(diǎn)的原因解釋,也未嘗不是一個(gè)好主意。我們?cè)賮砜纯催@個(gè)例子:
To sum up, the richer nations have helped a lot by providing money for poorcountries and poorer countries need to not only spend the money for daily use,but also put more money on economic developments, human resource improvementsand education advancements, because only by doing so can they change their poorsituations.
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