【看電影學(xué)托�！看笊耠娪啊渡缃痪W(wǎng)絡(luò)》與托福寫(xiě)作進(jìn)階教程

導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：最近批改同學(xué)們的作文時(shí)，老師看到童鞋們?cè)谡撟C時(shí)終于放下了Bill Gates退學(xué)掙大錢(qián)的梗，但還沒(méi)來(lái)的高興，就發(fā)現(xiàn)大家一轉(zhuǎn)身，只是給例子換了個(gè)名字，就開(kāi)始舉起了了江湖人稱(chēng)“小Bill Gates（比爾蓋茨）”的Mark Zuckerburg（馬克·扎克伯格）退學(xué)掙大錢(qián)的例子。

老師只能苦笑一聲：大家還是圖樣圖森破��！Zuckerberg（馬克·扎克伯格）這么活生生的、散發(fā)著理性主義七息和不按常理出牌的事業(yè)成功人士，怎么只能舉出一個(gè)層面的例子呢？今天咱們打開(kāi)傳統(tǒng)思維的局限，一起深度挖掘Zuckerberg（馬克·扎克伯格）的Facebook和托福寫(xiě)作的深層關(guān)系吧！

說(shuō)起Zuckerberg（馬克·扎克伯格），大家一定看過(guò)一個(gè)大熱電影，那個(gè)從不拍爛片的、老師非常崇拜的牛導(dǎo)演——大衛(wèi)芬奇拍攝的“the Social Network（社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)）”。

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電影最開(kāi)始的時(shí)候就說(shuō)到了Zuckerberg（馬克·扎克伯格）的“黑歷史”，他在失戀后（他的失戀可以總結(jié)一句話(huà)“不作不死”，感興趣的童鞋可以去參觀(guān)一下）躲在Harvard（哈佛大學(xué)）的宿舍里一邊喝悶酒，一邊黑進(jìn)多個(gè)學(xué)校的數(shù)據(jù)庫(kù)竊取了所有女生的照片，創(chuàng)建了“Facemash”——一個(gè)給女生外貌打分的網(wǎng)站，結(jié)果這個(gè)王站流量太大直接擠癱了學(xué)校的服務(wù)器，同時(shí)，此舉也得到了所有的女生集體譴責(zé)：看臉的Zuckerberg（馬克·扎克伯格）你夠了！注孤生！

結(jié)果。。�？上攵�知。。。他被留校察看六個(gè)月。。。

但是！下面的一幕，感覺(jué)到撲面而來(lái)的正能量了不？

原來(lái)Facebook的就是這樣醞釀出來(lái)的！這是不是印證了一個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)：從失敗中吸取經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)，最后能work out（制造）一個(gè)billion  dollar idea（億美元的想法）？

好，咱們來(lái)結(jié)合一個(gè)TPO獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作題目來(lái)練習(xí)一下：

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly

and make sure that everything is correct.

Use speci？c reasons and examples to support your answer.（TPO23）

很多同學(xué)反饋在寫(xiě)這道題目的時(shí)候不知道說(shuō)什么，打不開(kāi)思路，只能一遍一遍轉(zhuǎn)著車(chē)轱轆話(huà)：working quickly and taking risks bene？t us more，原因是這個(gè)，結(jié)果也是這個(gè)，所以我們要working quickly and taking risks…

（老師看到這樣的段落，表情是這樣的。。。）

現(xiàn)在咱們來(lái)結(jié)合剛才電影中的事跡來(lái)寫(xiě)一個(gè)論證段吧！

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Mark Zuckerberg created a program called Facemash that let students select the best looking person from a choice of photos, but the college shut it down because it had overwhelmed Harvard's network and prevented students from accessing the Internet. In addition, many students complained that their photos were being used without permission, the student paper even ran articles stating that his site was "completely improper.” However, he learnt from this failure and started to re？ect seriously what he really wanted to do. Finally, he launched Facebook——the social network that has changed the world ever since. Just as he once said, and I quote here "Move fast and break things. Unless you are breaking stuff, you are not moving fast enough.”或者這樣結(jié)尾：The biggest risk is not taking any risk. In a world that's changing really quickly, the only strategy that is guaranteed to fail is not taking risks.

(舉例論證+例？分析：121字plus)

打開(kāi)思路，在一個(gè)事件中發(fā)現(xiàn)不同的側(cè)面，并且整理好語(yǔ)言，論證真的沒(méi)有那么難對(duì)不對(duì)？

再來(lái)看一個(gè)TPO題目：

Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.（TPO20）

是不是也可以用這個(gè)例子？

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打開(kāi)了思路后，SAT的寫(xiě)作也可以用這些例子哦！來(lái)一起看一些SAT的寫(xiě)作題目：

Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things in their own way?

Is it necessary to make mistakes, even when doing so has negative consequences for other people?

Is it sometimes better to take risks than to follow a more reasonable course of action?

小伙伴們看了這么多期美劇-托福寫(xiě)作課，有沒(méi)有感受到平時(shí)很多有助于提升英語(yǔ)能里的素材就被自己忽略掉了呢？那就開(kāi)始多挖掘、多思考、多積累吧！這個(gè)過(guò)程就是進(jìn)步的過(guò)程喲！

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機(jī)會(huì)總是給有準(zhǔn)備的人~

機(jī)會(huì)總是給有準(zhǔn)備的人~

重要的事情，放在最后，triple一下~

只要堅(jiān)持下去，下一個(gè)寫(xiě)作滿(mǎn)分就是你咯！

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