【預測】10月8日雅思寫作預測解析

10月8日雅思寫作 Writing Task I:

1. 9月雅思小作文回顧：
　　我們首先來看看在九月的幾場雅思考試中，已經(jīng)出現(xiàn)的小作文類型：
　　a) 9.26 動態(tài)線圖（四個年齡段看電影的比例變化情況）
　　b) 9.19 線圖（五個國家在公共交通和私家車的使用率的）
　　c) 9.12線圖（關于犯罪人數(shù)）
　　d) 9.3  柱形圖（School A & School B的五門課程受歡迎人數(shù)的比較）
　　10月的雅思考試中，小作文大家需要高度預警流程圖，此外關注table，bar，和pie的寫法,今天我們就一起來學習下流程圖的寫作方法。

2. 破解流程圖
　　練習流程圖的四個步驟：
　　a) 讀懂題目中的各個過程
　　b) 每個步驟用短句寫出來
　　c) 短句變長句
　　d) 加入銜接詞，形成一篇完整的文章

流程圖實戰(zhàn)演練：

1. 讀懂題目
　　圖表主要告訴我們bottles的recycling process。首先集中回收used bottles，再將bottles運輸?shù)絚leaning plant進行沖洗（high pressurized water），清洗完畢根據(jù)顏色分類（classify/sort），再送到recycling plant，投入furnace得到recycling liquid glass，和new liquid glass一并倒入mould，形成新的bottles，最終運輸?shù)絚ustomer supermarket進行銷售。

2. 把每個過程用簡單句寫出來
　　The used bottles are placed in collection point by people.
　　The collected bottles are transported to plant by lorry or truck.
　　The bottles are washed by high pressurized water in cleaning plant.
　　The washed bottles are sorted into brown, green and clear ones according to their colors.
　　The classified bottles are delivered to recycling plant to be melted into recycling liquid glass in furnace
　　New liquid glass and recycling liquid glass are poured into mould to form new bottles
　　Bottles are transported to customer supermarket for sale.

3. 短句變長（短句變長的方法主要是分詞/從句/并列句）

The used bottles are placed in collection point by people, before being transported to plants by lorry or truck.
　　The bottles are sent to cleaning plant where the bottles are washed by high pressurized water
　　The washed bottles are sorted into brown, green and clear ones according to their colors, and the classified bottles are delivered to recycling plant in which the bottles are melted into recycling liquid glass in furnace.
　　As well as recycling liquid glass, new liquid glass is also poured into the mould to form new bottles.
　　Bottles filled with food and drinks are transported to supermarket and placed on shelves in an orderly arrangement, waiting to be selected and purchased by consumers.

4. 加上銜接詞，形成一篇完整的文章

The illustration provides some information about how the bottles are recycled.
　　In the first stage, the used bottles are placed in collection point by people, before being transported to plants by lorry or truck.
　　In the next stage, the bottles are firstly sent to cleaning plant where the bottles are washed by high pressurized water. The washed bottles are then sorted into brown, green and clear ones according to their colors, and the classified bottles are delivered to recycling plant in which the bottles are melted into recycling liquid glass in furnace. Finally, as well as recycling liquid glass, new liquid glass is also poured into the mould to form new bottles.
　　In the final stage, bottles filled with food and drinks are transported to supermarket and placed on shelves in an orderly arrangement, waiting to be selected and purchased by consumers.
　　Overall, the process of recycling bottles is relatively complex, starting from collecting wasted bottles and end at forming new ones.

10月8日雅思寫作Writing Task II

1. 回顧9月雅思考試出現(xiàn)過的大作文：
　　9.26 ——In many countries, there is no enough recycling of waste materials (eg. paper, glass, cans).What are the reasons and solutions?
　　9.19 ——Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because they do not to eat meat to stay health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
　　9.12 ——Students at schools and universities learn far more from teachers than from other resources (internet or television). Agree or disagree?
　　9.3 ——People are afraid to leave their homes for fear of crimes. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes while others think that little could be done. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

2. 備考方向：
　　備考十月份的雅思大作文時，大家要重點注意科技類和教育類的題目，下面我針對這兩個話題給出了雅思考官的兩篇范文，大家注意學習文章中的寫作思路及其句式。
　　科技類：
　　Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? 

范文：
　　It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects. 
　　Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face. 

On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction. For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships. 

In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionized communication between people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.

教育類
　　Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 

范文：
　　When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university. 
　　The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career. 

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete. 

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.

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