同學(xué)們都知道雅思考官在評判一篇雅思大作文時(shí),除了看文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和語言之外,還很重視該篇文章的主體內(nèi)容。
中國考生在寫essay時(shí)常見的一個(gè)問題恰恰是考前準(zhǔn)備了語言,臨場讀懂了題目,很快形成了觀點(diǎn),但是卻不知該從哪些角度來支持自己的thesis statement。
所以,主體段落觀點(diǎn)單調(diào),思維陳舊,內(nèi)容空洞,為達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)而把一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)寫了再寫等問題常常會充斥在文章的body part。
這極大地影響了考生的作文成績。在此,雅思考生A同學(xué)將多年積累的雅思大作文常見論點(diǎn)總結(jié)為一首打油詩,以饗讀者。
論文觀點(diǎn)角度多;
肉體靈魂不放過;
權(quán)利平等要把握;
文化道德思路擴(kuò);
結(jié)合話題多思索;
科技和經(jīng)濟(jì)
在雅思論文主體部分寫作中,科技角度是使用頻率最高的角度。絕大多數(shù)作文的話題都可以從科技發(fā)展對人的生活帶來的影響這個(gè)角度來加以分析。例如:
討論是否將動物用于科學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn):
Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men.Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account。
親情淡漠的原因:
The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families。
Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like。
The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women,creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males。
Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight。
高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性:
There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin。
Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life。
For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century。
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權(quán)利和平等:
四方的文化在一定程度上可以濃縮為:權(quán)利、平等和自由。中國考生在人們該不該做什么事情或行為的時(shí)候應(yīng)該多從這個(gè)方面去說服考官。
在寫到環(huán)境的重要性時(shí),可以說:
All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being。
運(yùn)動員是否應(yīng)該拿高薪:
Young people’s inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps. (個(gè)人的原因)
文化和道德:
文化和道德本來就是雅四大作文中較難的兩個(gè)話題,而近來這兩個(gè)話題考的頻率又很高。考生不防也從這兩個(gè)角度來準(zhǔn)備一下主體段落的觀點(diǎn)。
反對強(qiáng)勢文化入侵:
Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization。
The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on one’s personality。
總之,在大作文的主體段落寫作過程中,考生可以將以上的思路結(jié)合題目的特點(diǎn)綜合應(yīng)用,切忌生搬硬套。平時(shí)在讀文章時(shí)也要多總結(jié)別人的觀點(diǎn)角度,而后為我所用。這樣定能讓你逐漸形成西方的思維習(xí)慣,在考試中能才思泉涌,下筆有神。
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