4月18日托�？荚噷�(xiě)作真題及解析

作文

綜合寫(xiě)作

passage:

white orca spotted in Alaska and the one spotted in Russia can not be the same individual:

1)the slight difference in the skin color

2)two sightings are far away

3)the dorsal fins remain the same

professor:

it is possible to be the same individual

1) orcas’ skin can change in color season to season due to the growth of algae on the skin

2) different groups of orcas have different life styles:

the mammal hunting group: remains near the coast as the passage says, but the fishing hunting group can travel 2000 kilometer in the open ocean.

3)the dorsal fin will not grow when the orcas is 20 years old. So it is inaccurate to estimate the age of the orcas by its dorsal fins.

閱讀提到在 Alaska 和 Russia 發(fā)現(xiàn)的白色逆戟鯨可能不是同一品種，理由有三：膚色有細(xì)微差異；發(fā)現(xiàn)的兩地相隔很遠(yuǎn)；不同年齡，但背上的鰭一樣聽(tīng)力和閱讀意見(jiàn)不一，覺(jué)得有可能就是同種鯨，理由也對(duì)應(yīng)有三個(gè)：鯨的膚色會(huì)隨季節(jié)變化；不同鯨群生活方式不同，不一定住得近；鯨在 20 歲后鰭就停止生長(zhǎng)了，所以不能用鰭去判斷。

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In the lecture, the professor made several points about...

The professor argues that..... However, the reading passage contends that...

The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of point that are contrary to....

The first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that...

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獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作

it is more important to have a dream, even if it is too ambitions than to have a realistic goal.

獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作又探討了雄心壯志和生活現(xiàn)實(shí)的矛盾，對(duì)于以往機(jī)經(jīng)熟悉的同學(xué)會(huì)記得我們有過(guò)找一份容易入職的工作還是找一份自己理想的工作之間選擇的題目，這都是對(duì)于理想和現(xiàn)實(shí)的對(duì)比。我們可以 keep ambitious and have a dream in that it drives people on the way to chase a life of higher quality；as well a dream could give people courage to overcome the  obstacles with a belief and a faith their dream bestows；having a dream doesn’t equal being unrealistic, realistic goals are set to pave ways for the ultimate goal

我們也可以接地氣地找個(gè)小目標(biāo)，覺(jué)得現(xiàn)實(shí)更重要的考生可以從目標(biāo)大，容易受挫；小目標(biāo)為我們提供生活保障，這是最基礎(chǔ)的生存條件；目標(biāo)定得太高會(huì)不切實(shí)際，反而不利于人們腳踏實(shí)地去奮斗等等出發(fā)。