新通天津總結(jié)學生在雅思作文寫作中容易忽視的點和常見的錯誤

本篇文章主要通過學生在寫作中的錯誤實例， 論述一下基礎段學生在雅思作文寫作中容易忽視的點和常見的錯誤供大家參考。大致分為三大點：句子成分不完整（sentence structure fragment），中國式思維以及介詞的錯用。

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下面我們來看具體同學們的句子：

1. Sentence structure Fragment 句子成分不完整

a. Government should investment more funds into infrastructure. 

Where is Verb? 在a句中，should 為情態(tài)動詞，不能獨立作謂語，后面應加動詞原形，而句中的“investment ”為名詞，所以造成整句話的動詞缺失。

b. Establishing a new restaurant in foreign country will challenges because different countries have different cultures.

b句中，will為助動詞，不可單獨作謂語，而后面的“challenges” 為名詞，造成了整句話的動詞，也就是謂語缺失。

c. I tend to agree that young children can be negatively by too much time spending on computer everyday.

c句中，agree后面的賓語從句，出現(xiàn)了can be, 同學在這句話中想用被動語態(tài)進行敘述，被動語態(tài)的構(gòu)成是“ be動詞+動詞的過去分詞形式”， 可后面的“negatively”為副詞， 同樣地，這句話缺少了一個動詞。

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2.中式思維是中國學生在雅思作文中最常出現(xiàn)的錯誤，影響整體作文的閱讀性。

a. In a word, people could select their suitable ways of working according to their needs.

a句出現(xiàn)在總結(jié)段的最后，學生想通過這句話提出自己的一個建議或者是引薦，可是情態(tài)動詞中， we use “should” for advice and recommendation，也就是說這句話中，我們用“should”會更精確。

b. Everyone can choose their suitable ways of working.

b句中的錯誤是中國學生們的常見問題，習慣用everyone這種詞，此類詞的表達意思都太絕對，例如本句話中，不是每個人都有這個觀點或者能力來做后面的這件事。

c. Although various culture people have totally different living habits, they feel satisfied all the time.

c句中，句尾的“all the time”, 用的太“強勢”了，這時候，判卷人就會特別懷疑的想著“ are you sure”, 沒有任何人可以證明這些人一直都非常滿足。

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3.介詞的錯用(prep)

a. For instance, softerware which no matter what jobs people has been installed on computers allow people to arrange files. (in)

b. Tele-working is time-saving, which means people can avoid waiting for the time-consuming traffic jams. (in)

c. In particular, people always feel relaxed and less stressful when they are working at their own flats. (in)

d. Especially, for women who have babies, it is redundant to arrange working time and take care of their babies at home than working at long-distance offices. (In)

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