2015年3月21日雅思寫作機(jī)經(jīng)（網(wǎng)友回憶版）

2015年3月21日雅思寫作機(jī)經(jīng)（網(wǎng)友回憶版）

大作文：

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aids organizations draws the attentions to problems. Others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?(名人效應(yīng)+國際援助)

 Task 1 地圖題

The map describes the development of a college campus in 1990, 2010 and 2020.

由于考情回憶有限，本期小作文范文暫不提供。

分析：

題目屬于新中等。要求是雙邊論證并給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。也是和之前被瘋傳的冰桶挑戰(zhàn)有點(diǎn)相同。一些人覺得這很好，也有些人覺得這是在作秀，就比如這幾天陳光標(biāo)被爆出他的冰桶挑戰(zhàn)其實(shí)不是冰水，是溫水。

這個(gè)題目有很多關(guān)鍵詞，famous people，international aid organization, MAKE problems less important. 很容易跑題，或者舉例不恰當(dāng).

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With the negative influence of famous people’s bad behavior exposing to our slight more frequently, plenty of citizens begin to doubt their support towards international aid organizations. However, many people still believethat famous people are helpers rather problem makers. From my point of view, international aid organizations can attract more citizens’ attention on problems if celebrities give the right support and set up good images.

It is sensible to argue that international charity groups can take advantage of the publicity of celebrities. With the announcement of high-profile figures, such as famous singers, movie stars and sports professionals, the activities or campaigns of international organisations can be responded immediately, if they are endorsed by celebrities. In the early time of this year, ALS Ice Bucket Challengespread around the world within a few days by the sharing of many celebrities. Meanwhile, the organisations also received millions of donationby fans as well.

Nevertheless, it is an undeniable fact that a small part of celebrities don’t gain much popularity or bring any convenience to international aid organizations. Although some celebrities give their support to these organizations outwardly, they don’t bring any tangible help. For example, some celebrities lead a luxurious life and never take practical actions to social problems, or even only take advantage of international aid organizations to advocate for themselves. As a result, the public will looseconfidence to these organizations, not to mentionsolving problems.

To sum up, I believe international aid organizations will receive much more help from celebrities and figure out more problems if celebrities can make the right choices and theircelebrity effect is used appropriately.

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