雅思寫作：如何寫出出彩的開頭

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2015-03-17 來(lái)源：互聯(lián)網(wǎng) 作者：閱讀量：手機(jī)閱讀

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萬(wàn)事開頭難，雅思寫作也不例外，那么怎樣才能寫出出彩的開頭，吸引考官的眼球呢？經(jīng)過(guò)對(duì)劍橋真題和高分作文的研習(xí)歸納后可以發(fā)現(xiàn)，開頭段可先通過(guò)對(duì)寫作背景的的介紹來(lái)引出話題，同時(shí)應(yīng)該從內(nèi)容和句型上同時(shí)做到補(bǔ)充。

下面結(jié)合實(shí)例給大家介紹三種擴(kuò)充背景句的方法：

一、追根溯源法

即從題目給出的話題中找出這個(gè)現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因來(lái)擴(kuò)展背景句。這種方法適合大多數(shù)的話題，考生要盡量在考前做練習(xí)，這樣在考試時(shí)就可以得心應(yīng)手了。

例子：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

這個(gè)題目中給出的話題是mobile phone，所以考生可以從它產(chǎn)生的原因來(lái)考慮，即科技的繁榮，而科技的繁榮，手機(jī)的廣泛使用是在20世紀(jì)末，這樣背景句就有內(nèi)容可寫了。當(dāng)然要通過(guò)相應(yīng)的句型或詞語(yǔ)把自己的思路轉(zhuǎn)化成文章。經(jīng)常閱讀科普文章的同學(xué)會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，在文章的開頭作者常會(huì)用到“見證”這個(gè)詞，那么在英語(yǔ)里面也有同樣的用法，這個(gè)詞就是witness, 那么背景句就可以寫成：

The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including/in particular the mobile phone.

有了以上背景句做鋪墊，之后就可以順理成章的引出討論話題。

二、重述法

即對(duì)作文話題的當(dāng)前現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行重述。

例子：Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。

本題的話題關(guān)于壓力，那考生可從當(dāng)前社會(huì)現(xiàn)象來(lái)考慮這個(gè)問(wèn)題，考生不難想出當(dāng)下對(duì)壓力這一現(xiàn)象的情況，即很多人都在承受著或多或少來(lái)自工作的壓力。在這里我們可用it is generally believed that … 形式主語(yǔ)的句型進(jìn)行寫作，即：

It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.

三、定義法

即通過(guò)對(duì)話題詞的定義的介紹。這種方法有一定難度，考生需要有淵博的知識(shí)，才能做到對(duì)名詞的解釋，但對(duì)特別明顯的詞語(yǔ)，考生可借鑒這種方法。

例子：The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

本題中的話題詞為圖書館，可以解釋的詞也是圖書館比較方便容易。那么到底如何解釋呢，比如說(shuō)圖書館在傳統(tǒng)意義上來(lái)看，是收藏書的地方，而現(xiàn)在因?yàn)榭萍及l(fā)展，使得圖書館的意義發(fā)生改變，從而引出話題。這里同樣可以用形式主語(yǔ)：

It is generally believed that public libraries are places with a large collection of books; however, the digital time has given it a new means of storing and retrieving information.

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從以上的分析，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)在內(nèi)容上是有方法了，不難從內(nèi)容上找材料，可是如果句型積累不多的話，寫出來(lái)的句子也是無(wú)法得到高分的，所以接下來(lái)，為大家介紹下常用的高分句型。

強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：

1) It is … that …

2) It is … who …

Eg.It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists.

下面是考官范文里的句子：

It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops.

2、形式主語(yǔ)：

1) It is generally believed,

2) It is commonly acknowledged that …

3) It is apparent that … 等

Eg: It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collar workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.

3、狀語(yǔ)前置：

我們來(lái)看一個(gè)劍6高分范文中的句子:

In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.

Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

4、時(shí)間引導(dǎo)的敘述句型

Lately, the problem of unemployment has been brought to popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.

根據(jù)以上分析，考生可通過(guò)這兩個(gè)方面來(lái)做到背景句的描寫，從而在開頭就吸引考官的注意力，好的開始是成功的一半，有了好的開始，為考生在寫作中做到思路清晰，以及節(jié)省時(shí)間都打了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。