托福寫作：那些絕對不能出現(xiàn)的開頭問題

之前介紹過托福寫作如何寫好開頭，其實相對的是托�？荚噷懽髦写蠹业拈_頭經(jīng)常有各種問題，而且有一些是非常要命的，下面列舉的就是托�？荚噷懽髦心切┙^對不能出現(xiàn)的開頭問題，希望大家能重視。

托福寫作開頭過分簡單沒有重點

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

托�？荚噷懽鏖_頭用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

托福考試寫作意思重復(fù)原地踏步

典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

中國俗語胡亂翻譯

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

觀點武斷 態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬

典型失敗案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

托�？荚噷懽鲗τ诖蠹襾碚f都是比較重要的，而一個好的托�？荚噷懽鏖_頭能為自己賺取不少分?jǐn)?shù)，希望大家以后練托福寫作時就能多注意。

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