【獨(dú)家】2015年01月29日雅思寫作真題回顧

2015年1月29日雅思寫作真題回顧

　　Writing Task 1:
 　　流程圖
       
　　The diagram is a detailed illustration of how canned fruit is produced with different materials and facilities used.
In the first stage, farmers pick the fruits from tress. Then, these fruits are transported to factory where degenerative ones are eliminated. After that, good fruits are stored in the cool storage to keep fresh, before going through the washing process. In the next step, these good fruits are weighted and peeled, after which they are divided into slices by knives.
Next, these sliced fruits are extracted into water, juice and syrup and prepared for sealing. Subsequently, the sealed juice is cooked and sterilized by high temperature in order to kill bacteria. Then, the fruit juice is cooked and packed until it is sent to the supermarkets in boxes for sale.

To summarize, the canned fruit production consists of several stages, starting from picking fresh fruits and ending at being sent to supermarkets.

相關(guān)練習(xí)素材及備考建議：
　　流程圖考得幾率不是很大，大家可以參考劍橋雅思真題8test3的小作文concrete的制作

　　Writing Task 2:
　　Nowadays, both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

題目類型：利弊類
　　提綱
　　開頭段：改寫題目，說明現(xiàn)在流行的趨勢就是去邊遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)旅游和做研究
　　主體段：可分為三段，可以兩邊寫，也可以一邊倒。此文中采取的兩邊寫，即利弊都寫。

第一段：第一個(gè)利，科學(xué)家能夠挖掘當(dāng)?shù)刭Y源，解決資源短缺問題

第二段：第二個(gè)利，游客認(rèn)識(shí)到對(duì)當(dāng)?shù)丨h(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性，會(huì)自覺保護(hù)

第三段：寫不好的方面,太多人去會(huì)對(duì)當(dāng)?shù)丨h(huán)境造成破壞

　　結(jié)尾段：簡單陳述以利的方面，加上一個(gè)前提

As remote natural places are expected to have plenty of mysteries and resources, there is a growing tendency that both scientists and tourists become involved and interested in setting foot in these spots. In my point of view, the advantages of this development overtake its drawbacks.

To begin with the first benefit, scientists who go to distant natural environments can help deal with an unprecedented resource problem, which can only be tackled by discovering and mining new resources in uncleared areas .These scientists often conduct ground investigation in these remote areas where natural resources, such as coal, oil, are abundant. For example, South pole is known as the container of huge coal and gas reserve. As a result, local resources can be exploited to cater for the use for all the human beings and thus solve some extreme resource urgency in the globe .

Furthermore, tourists traveling around these distant uncontaminated places may realize the fragility and purity of local environment and call for more people to protect its natural scenery.These places are usually out of pollution and are so breathtaking that people are deeply impressed and shocked. Thereafter, these tourists may launch awareness campaign to protect local environment of their own accord.For example, they may raise funds to plant more trees in case of destructive debris flow in local areas.

However, it should be noted that the more people go to these remote unspoiled places, the more harm people may cause to the local environment. Since they have to consume local resources to survive, like logging woods to make fire, these behaviors pose threat to local fragile ecosystem. Sometimes, they may even make such irretrievable mistakes, such as excessive development of resources, that local natural culture is at the edge of extinction. However, this irreparable destruction can be avoided provided that these people are educated decent behaviors before stepping in local land.

To sum up, it is advocated that scientists and tourists visiting these remote natural areas can help tap local natural resources potential and enable more people to have a clear perspective of local natural culture, on condition that they take proper measures and cause least harm to local ecosystem.

　　相關(guān)詞伙：
　　詞匯/短語　　　　　　　　　詞義　　詞性
　　1 become involved in　　　　使卷入 　v
　　2 unprecedented　　　　　　空前的　adj
　　3 mining　　　　　　　　　　采礦　　v
　　4 uncleared areas　　　　　未開墾的地區(qū)　n
　　5 conduct ground investigation　地質(zhì)勘測　v
　　6 resource urgency　　　　　資源緊缺　　n
　　7 uncontaminated　　　　　　未被污染　adj
　　8 fragility　　　　　　　　　　脆弱　　　n
　　9 breathtaking　　　　　　　令人激動(dòng)的　adj
　　10 launch awareness campaign 開展宣傳活動(dòng) v
　　11 of their own accord 　　　　自愿　　　adv
　　12 debris flow　　　　　　　　泥石流　　　n
　　13 irretrievable　　　　　　　無可挽回的　adj
　　14 excessive development　　過度開發(fā)　　n
　　15 at the edge of extinction　　滅絕邊緣　　n
　　16 irreparable destruction　　不可挽回的破壞　n
　　17 have a clear perspective of　有清晰的了解　v

　　
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