雅思口語隱形的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：detail

雅思口語part two的部分，考官會(huì)給考生一個(gè)cue card，要求學(xué)生獨(dú)立完成2分鐘的描述，而考官會(huì)按照四項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)做出打分，四項(xiàng)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別是：lexical resource（詞匯）， grammar（語法），pronunciation（發(fā)音）以及fluency and coherence（流利和關(guān)聯(lián)性）。
　　近一兩年，考官們對(duì)學(xué)生的口語要求越來越高，慢慢地， 他們已經(jīng)把“detail（細(xì)節(jié)）”作為一項(xiàng)“隱形”的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)， 雖然它并沒有被列入官方指南。

在考生開始part two的話題自述之前，都會(huì)有一分鐘的準(zhǔn)備時(shí)間理思路，準(zhǔn)備一下會(huì)說什么內(nèi)容。但是這短短的一分鐘內(nèi)，考生真正能記錄下什么呢？最多只能零散地寫下幾個(gè)詞匯， 短語或者短句罷了。所以要支撐起一個(gè)兩分鐘的描述，豐富的內(nèi)容以及舉例是非常重要的。很多中國考生對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)展開的意識(shí)還是比較弱的。

以一個(gè)真題為例：

Describe a popular singer not from your country

You should say:
　　Who the singer is?
　　What type of music he or she performs?
　　What kind of person he/ she is?
　　And explain why the singer is popular?

在這邊展示兩個(gè)學(xué)生準(zhǔn)備的版本，通過比較大家會(huì)非常直觀地看到“細(xì)節(jié)”的重要性。

版本一：
　　Question 1: the popular singer I like is Avril.
　　Question 2: she mainly sings and composes rock songs.
　　Question 3: in my eyes, she is a person of personalities.
　　Question 4: Avril is very popular among the young guys all over the world, because she is very beautiful. And also, she is a very good actress. And her movies make her even more popular.

版本二：
　　Question 1: the popular singer I fancy I like is Avril who is one of the most famous top-selling artists in today’s world.
　　Question 2: she mainly sings and composes rock music which features a strong beat and fast rhythm. And her music never fails to get into my body making my body wave.

Question 3: in my eyes, Avril is a person of personalities. Very unlike many other celebrities who are very careful about every single detail in talking and behaving, Avril is always into living in the way that she feels comfortable. Just to give you an example, Avril once made headlines for some negative news, like divorce, tattoo and etc. But the brave girl hardly cares about what we are thinking of her.

Question 4: Avril is very popular among the young guys all over the world, and the reasons are various. To begin with, she has an attractive appearance, long blonde hair and two sparkling blue eyes. More importantly, the fact that she is a multi-talented artist is more persuasive. You may not know, she is also a successful movie actress who has appeared in many popular Hollywood movies.

大家可以比較這兩個(gè)版本。第一個(gè)版本雖然把四個(gè)sub-questions都作出了回答， 但是很明顯，只是流水帳式地走了一遍，每一個(gè)小問題都沒有進(jìn)一步的描述。這樣的回答是根本不能夠支撐起兩分鐘，語速快的同學(xué)很可能半分鐘不到就說完了。這樣考官必然會(huì)扣分，因?yàn)檫B考試的基本要求都沒有達(dá)成�？脊僖欢〞�(huì)說“talk more”.

相較第二個(gè)版本，就篇幅來看，一般來說，考生們應(yīng)該是能說到兩分鐘的，所以基本上話題的完成度是不會(huì)失分。更重要的是，大家可以發(fā)現(xiàn)，細(xì)節(jié)性的內(nèi)容更能讓這個(gè)話題變得生動(dòng)具體而且有感染力。例如第一問，版本二用了一個(gè)who引導(dǎo)的定語從句對(duì)Avril這名歌手的歌壇地位作了一個(gè)闡述。

針對(duì)第二個(gè)問題，版本二的內(nèi)容很生動(dòng)地描述Arvil的搖滾樂的特色以及她創(chuàng)作的音樂對(duì)聽眾的獨(dú)特感染力。至于第三問題，談到歌手的性格，后者在保留版本一，表明Avril這個(gè)歌手是很有個(gè)性，與眾不同的基礎(chǔ)上，又通過與其他名人的對(duì)比以及舉例來說服考官接受你定義的“與眾不同”。

說到第四問，考生們應(yīng)該清楚這個(gè)是整個(gè)話題的核心問題，是最需要考生通過更多的細(xì)節(jié)，去呈現(xiàn)給考官一些原因性的內(nèi)容。那么例題中版本二的內(nèi)容從兩方面去陳述理由，Avril突出的外貌條件和多才多藝作為理由來證明該歌手廣受歡迎。

以上例題的分析，廣大考生們應(yīng)該能清楚地懂得細(xì)節(jié)的重要性。豐富的內(nèi)容及不但能夠拖延時(shí)間又可以使得自己的整體話題描述變得有趣更引人入勝，考官才會(huì)愿意有耐心地傾聽你的話題描述。