雅思寫作：中國(guó)考生最常犯的7類錯(cuò)誤

中國(guó)考生在雅思寫作中的錯(cuò)誤驚人的相似，下文小編為大家分類整理了7類典型的雅思寫作錯(cuò)誤，并附上學(xué)生例句作為負(fù)面教材，以及分析和修正版例句，希望對(duì)大家的雅思寫作備考有幫助！

1．雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句

e.g. For those under 26, there were 80% students study for career.   There be句型屬于雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句高發(fā)句型，因?yàn)榫渲械腷e動(dòng)詞已經(jīng)是謂語(yǔ)，而句子后面的動(dòng)詞通常是定語(yǔ)從句中的成分，故不能作為主句中的謂語(yǔ)。

例句中同時(shí)出現(xiàn)了“were”和“study”，根據(jù)上面的分析，were應(yīng)該是謂語(yǔ)，而study for career應(yīng)該是定語(yǔ)從句，因此，例句應(yīng)修正改成：For those under 26, there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26, there were 80% students studying for career. 

又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.

應(yīng)改成：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.

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2.句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語(yǔ)是the most popular kind of transport，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（系動(dòng)詞）是was, 而by road按照語(yǔ)法應(yīng)該是方式狀語(yǔ)，此句缺乏表語(yǔ)。

應(yīng)改成：The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如：Many factories in order to get more profits, which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的狀語(yǔ)“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句“which made waste water and waste gas”, 剩下的是many factories, 不能作為一個(gè)句子。

根據(jù)此句想表達(dá)的意思，應(yīng)改為：Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

3.主系表結(jié)構(gòu)使用錯(cuò)誤

e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：we are impossible“我們是不可能”，表意不對(duì)。

這種表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)中對(duì)應(yīng)的句型是：It is…for…to…, 所以應(yīng)該改成：It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

類似的錯(cuò)誤例句還有：People are very convenient to get information on the Internet. His profession is a teacher.

4.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后的動(dòng)詞原形和動(dòng)名詞的使用出錯(cuò)

e.g. Another equally vital point to be considered is that building them may costs much money and energy.

這種錯(cuò)誤可能是筆誤，在雅思作文中偶爾出現(xiàn)不至于扣分，但是通篇都是這樣的錯(cuò)誤，那么肯定是有影響的。

e.g. Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

“花更多時(shí)間在電腦上”這個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作為主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該要用動(dòng)名詞形式：Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

5.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)用錯(cuò)

e.g. As far as I am concerned, people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

引導(dǎo)的句子做原因狀語(yǔ)從句，既然是從句，那么前面就不應(yīng)該使用句號(hào)使其獨(dú)立成句，而應(yīng)該改成逗號(hào)，because首字母小寫。

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6.詞性使用錯(cuò)誤

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介詞，而這里構(gòu)成to do（不定式），只能用動(dòng)詞。

因此，可改為：One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

e.g. Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which leads to that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to中to是介詞，后面不能直接加句子，因此可在leads to后加一名詞，構(gòu)成同位語(yǔ)從句：Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which leads to the fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

7.從句的誤用和濫用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語(yǔ)，固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句連用，氣勢(shì)磅礴，這就是所謂的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay, I will discuss what those, who are two kinds of people in this topic, are how to think and how to choose.實(shí)再迂回婉轉(zhuǎn)，不知所云。

除了上面所列其中語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤情況以外，常見語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤還包括：主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)，特殊句型（如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等）使用錯(cuò)誤以及邏輯問題等。

希望眾考生能多練筆，給老師批改。把常犯的錯(cuò)誤記下來(lái)，分析錯(cuò)誤的成因，在以后的練習(xí)中提醒自己不要再犯。只要這樣堅(jiān)持一段時(shí)間，相信you can make a difference。

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