推陳出新！雅思寫(xiě)作議論文的結(jié)尾新寫(xiě)法

深入考究了數(shù)篇考官的雅思寫(xiě)作范文之后，筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)傳統(tǒng)的雅思議論文結(jié)尾中，其實(shí)蘊(yùn)含了很多變化。傳統(tǒng)的雅思議論文結(jié)尾包含了以下三個(gè)預(yù)賽寫(xiě)作要素，即：回顧觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立面；重申自己觀點(diǎn)或立場(chǎng)；展望或建議。在新的雅思議論文結(jié)尾寫(xiě)法中，我們可以增加的雅思寫(xiě)作元素包括：原因，條件等，換言之，在給出自己的觀點(diǎn)后，我們可以繼續(xù)通過(guò)其他方式來(lái)深化主題，從而達(dá)到更好的表達(dá)效果，為雅思寫(xiě)作增光添彩。首先我們來(lái)看一個(gè)例子：
 
　　Therefore, in spite of some opposition, I still feel that charging visitors abroad a higher fee should continue to be implemented in some developing countries, especially in those very poor nations in Africa and Asia. Meanwhile, I wish the local governments would use the money sensibly to help the residents and protect their beautiful land and precious historical sites. Only by doing so will international tourism contribute to a win-win result.

這個(gè)結(jié)尾前面部分都采用了傳統(tǒng)的寫(xiě)法，即回顧，提出觀點(diǎn)和展望。但是在最后一個(gè)句子里，作者增加了一個(gè)條件，采用了倒裝句的方式，這樣做的好處在于在展望的基礎(chǔ)上繼續(xù)深化了題干的主題，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府通過(guò)收取海外游客更高的費(fèi)用來(lái)促進(jìn)自身經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，這種做法作者是支持的，而最后這個(gè)條件的設(shè)定則延伸到了國(guó)際旅游的積極意義上。
 
　　Accordingly, I am in favor of the view that women should be given the equal rights to do whatever they like just as men and they should be allowed to join army, the navy, and the air force because they are really suited.

這個(gè)結(jié)尾的題目講的是女性是否應(yīng)該參軍或者加入警察隊(duì)伍。在結(jié)束部分，作者增加了一個(gè)原因，而這個(gè)原因其實(shí)并不需要在前面的主體段中提及，只是放在最后表達(dá)了作者個(gè)人的情感因素，從而增加文章的感情色彩，因此也不失為一個(gè)好的方法。
 
　　Striking a work-life balance isn't a one-shot deal. Creating balance in our life is a continuous process. But balance doesn't mean doing everything. Therefore, we need to examine our priorities and set boundaries and be firm in what we can and cannot do. Only we can restore harmony to our lifestyle.

這是一個(gè)分析解決型的大作文的結(jié)尾，從劃線的二個(gè)句子來(lái)看，前者描述了為什么短期內(nèi)平衡工作和生活不是件容易的事情;而后者則給出了條件，即事在人為。從這個(gè)例子中，我們得到的啟發(fā)是將原因和條件這二個(gè)“新”元素和其他三個(gè)傳統(tǒng)要素相融合，不是機(jī)械式地按部就班，而是靈活地根據(jù)結(jié)尾原來(lái)設(shè)定好的意思穿插在其中。這樣使得表達(dá)效果就更好了。
 
　　Tobacco should be made illegal, I agree with this idea personally. I hope most drugs can be made illegal, because, as far as I know, they are bad to our health. However, currently most countries still keep it free to use tobacco, and this situation seems to be very hard to change in a short time.

同樣的方法可以從這個(gè)結(jié)尾段中看到，作者在表達(dá)自己的立場(chǎng)后馬上給出了一個(gè)原因，而這個(gè)原因不是之前提到過(guò)的，而是帶有作者自己明顯的感情色彩。因此，我們一開(kāi)始在結(jié)尾段中增加原因這個(gè)要素時(shí)，可先從觀點(diǎn)句后寫(xiě)起，慢慢再進(jìn)行順序的變化。

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　　Certainly, medical care and education both play dominant roles, but building theaters and sports stadiums will benefit not only the individual both mentally and physically, but a nation and continent permanently because they lead to a healthy lifestyle both mentally and physically.

這個(gè)結(jié)尾段將觀點(diǎn)和展望結(jié)合在了一個(gè)句子里面，作者通過(guò)最后一句原因的描述，很好地補(bǔ)充了政府投資體育設(shè)施和藝術(shù)文化設(shè)施的深遠(yuǎn)影響，從而深化了主題。
 
　　通過(guò)上述幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的雅思寫(xiě)作例子，我們已經(jīng)對(duì)于雅思議論文的結(jié)尾新寫(xiě)法有了一個(gè)比較全面的認(rèn)識(shí)，在實(shí)施這套雅思議論文的結(jié)尾寫(xiě)法時(shí)，首先我們需要用傳統(tǒng)的三個(gè)雅思寫(xiě)作要素去構(gòu)思結(jié)尾的整個(gè)意思，然后將原因和條件各選一個(gè)意思插入結(jié)尾段的整個(gè)意思中去，這時(shí)候，原來(lái)的三個(gè)要素中，我們可能需要去掉一二個(gè)，比如去掉回顧觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立面的部分或者去掉展望或建議，也可以保留傳統(tǒng)的三個(gè)要素�？傊�，在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候需要多花1-2分鐘整體構(gòu)思下雅思寫(xiě)作結(jié)尾的意思，方可動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)。

雅思寫(xiě)作議論文的結(jié)尾范例：
 
　　● In conclusion, real public museums will never be replaced by the Internet, as computer technology is just a supplementary mean to cope museums offer better services to the public.
 
　　● In most societies, people with competitive spirit are more determined to do more and achieve more while businesses are obliged to learn to become increasingly efficient. Thus, competition is really an essential power to move society ahead, as if by an invisible hand. This is because ultimately, competition is good as it sets goals for people and fills the social environment with excitement.
 
　　● After all, greed being a human instinct, consumers have only themselves to blame for their foolishness toward advertisements. Since outlawing commercial advertising is out of the question, people should educate themselves to be more prudent in buying and spending behaviors. As for consumers, what better measures can be taken to protect themselves other than self-control?
 
　　● The point is that sending criminals to prison is effective, if only by moving them away from the community. On the other hand, to regard prison education as an effective "punishment" is simply wishful-thinking, in view of relevant evidence that underlies recidivism. In all events, education provides opportunities, however limited, but it depends on the way those repeat offenders see these opportunities, the rest being pure guessing.
 
　　● It becomes clear that governments should not only provide funding for scientific research but also support experimental development for "non-scientific" research, since both kinds of research are essential to society in progress. Accordingly, it is always good to remember that research for physics, chemistry and biology carries more weight and usually deserves more public money; nevertheless, it is also important not to forget research for less useful subjects.

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