【教師解讀】11月22日雅思寫(xiě)作考題與范文

11月22日雅思寫(xiě)作考題解析與范文

　　The tables below show how the number of international students from three resource countries changed in the USA and Canada.
（具體數(shù)據(jù)欠缺，僅供參考）
       

The number of students

題目分析：
　　表格，動(dòng)態(tài)圖，重點(diǎn)寫(xiě)每個(gè)國(guó)家去加拿大和美國(guó)的留學(xué)生在每個(gè)學(xué)期之間數(shù)量的變化，以及兩個(gè)表格之間的對(duì)比。

　　范文：
　　The tables presents the fluctuation of the number of international students from three resource countries in America and Canada respectively.
（具體數(shù)據(jù)缺失，故只能提供開(kāi)頭段）

相關(guān)練習(xí)素材及備考建議：
　　表格圖一般間隔一個(gè)月左右出現(xiàn)一次，上次出現(xiàn)是10月11日，同學(xué)們可以參考C4-T1（P31)
　　C5-T4(P98)C6-T2(P52) C7-T1(P30)第一部分做練習(xí)。

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　　Task 2
　　Online  shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or  negative development
　　題目類(lèi)型：討論類(lèi)

　　提綱：
        

　　The spread of computer and Internet has changed nearly every aspect of human being’s life, one of which is the public’s shopping mode. Today, online shopping gains the popularity among every walk of life, not only the young consumers as experts once expected. Many people, according, worry that it may soon substitute the conventional shopping in stores. From my perspective, online shopping is an inevitable trend that the modern technology brings to us. Thus, what we should do is nothing but to embrace it. (非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句）

Online shopping conduces to relieving the unemployment problem. It offers the young entrepreneurs a chance to start their own business without considering the rent of the store. The flourish of some related industries, to some extent, is also associated with the boom of online shopping, to name a few, the transportation and the logistics. One needs look no further than the example of “November 11th” in China. For the Chinese netizens, November 11th is no longer just a date, but a celebration event for online shopping, for nearly all the e-commerce websites would offer 50% discount on that day. This year, the November 11th brought huge profits not only to the online store owners, but also stimulated the prosperity of logistics. Thus, online shopping is a sound platform to absorb the young laborers. (插入語(yǔ)，動(dòng)名詞）

The consumers are also the beneficiaries of online shopping, considering that it enriches people’s daily lives. Now, it is not as difficult as before for the young parents in China to purchase the milk powder from the foreign websites for their newborn baby. It also seems not impossible for the Chinese girls to dress themselves up with the elegant skirts made in Korea or Japan. In a word, online shopping offers the consumers a wider range of options. (原因狀語(yǔ)從句， 雙重否定）

The vulnerable nature of the Internet, on the other hand, also warns the public the safety of online shopping. The rampant internet fraud poses a potential hazard to the internet user’s safety of their bank accounts. Another fact that is worth mentioning is that the conventional stores’ profits are severely affected due to the competition from the invisible stores on the websites. Many of the former even face the bankruptcy owing to the declining number of consumers. (同位語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句）

In brief, online shopping is the outcome of modern technology. Therefore, it is highly advisable for the public to make full use of the advantages it may bring to us, while combat the Internet crimes to guarantee the consumer’s safety. Only in this way can the technology serves human being’s life as far as possible. (倒裝句）

相關(guān)題目辨析：
　　People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face to face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole?（2013.7.18）

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