雅思寫作語法七大致命傷

雅思寫作語法致命傷1. 雙謂語錯句

e.g. For those under 26， there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型屬于雙謂語錯句高發(fā)句型，因為句中的be動詞已經(jīng)是謂語，而句子后面的動詞通常是定語從句中的成分，故不能作為主句中的謂語。例句中同時出現(xiàn)了“were”和“study”，根據(jù)上面的分析，were應該是謂語，而study for career應該是定語從句，因此，例句應修正改成：

For those under 26， there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26， there were 80% students studying for career.

又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.應改成：

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.

雅思寫作語法致命傷2. 句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語是the most popular kind of transport，謂語動詞(系動詞)是was， 而by road按照語法應該是方式狀語，此句缺乏表語。應改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如：Many factories in order to get more profits， which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的狀語“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定語從句“which made waste water and waste gas”， 剩下的是many factories， 不能作為一個句子。根據(jù)此句想表達的意思，應改為：

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

雅思寫作語法致命傷3. 主系表結(jié)構(gòu)使用錯誤

e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：we are impossible“我們是不可能”，表意不對。這種表達在英語中對應的句型是：It is…for…to…，

所以應該改成：

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

類似的錯誤例句還有：People are very convenient to get information on the Internet.

His profession is a teacher.

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雅思寫作語法致命傷4. 情態(tài)動詞后的動詞原形和動名詞的使用出錯

e.g. Another equally vital point to be considered is that building them may costs much money and energy.

這種錯誤可能是筆誤，在雅思作文中偶爾出現(xiàn)不至于扣分，但是通篇都是這樣的錯誤，那么肯定是有影響的。

e.g. Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

“花更多時間在電腦上”這個動詞短語作為主語應該要用動名詞形式：

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

雅思寫作語法致命傷5. 標點符號用錯

e.g. As far as I am concerned， people should take exercise and relax

themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

Because引導的句子做原因狀語從句，既然是從句，那么前面就不應該使用句號使其獨立成句，而應該改成逗號，because首字母小寫。

雅思寫作語法致命傷6. 詞性使用錯誤

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介詞，而這里構(gòu)成to do(不定式)，只能用動詞。因此，可改為：

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

e.g. Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which leads to that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to中to是介詞，后面不能直接加句子，因此可在leads to后加一名詞，構(gòu)成同位語從句：

Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which leads to the fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

雅思寫作語法致命傷7. 從句的誤用和濫用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語，固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引導的定語從句和that引導的表語從句連用，氣勢磅礴，這就是所謂的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay， I will discuss what those， who are two kinds of people in this topic， are how to think and how to choose. 實再迂回婉轉(zhuǎn)，不知所云。

除了上面所列其中7類語法錯誤情況以外，常見的雅思寫作語法錯誤還包括：主謂一致，時態(tài)，特殊句型(如倒裝句，強調(diào)句等)使用錯誤以及邏輯問題等。

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