托福寫作詞匯運(yùn)用：名詞化體現(xiàn)寫作水平

托福寫作中，擅用名詞化不僅體現(xiàn)了寫作水平，更是一種思維方式。曾經(jīng)一個(gè)針對(duì)中國(guó)幾所頂尖大學(xué)的優(yōu)秀作文的調(diào)查顯示，20 篇優(yōu)秀作文中名詞化的使用頻率為7%-8%，而普通習(xí)作的使用頻率僅為5%-6%。與此同時(shí)，選用了20 篇英語(yǔ)國(guó)家學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)作文，同樣的方法統(tǒng)計(jì)出其名詞化的使用頻率為10%-15%。有人更是戲說(shuō)道，老外眼中句子分為3個(gè)檔次，最差的是主動(dòng)句，較好的是被動(dòng)句，倒裝句等，最好的nominalization(名詞化)的句子，這樣的句子最學(xué)術(shù)最適合寫論文。

簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)，名詞化即是動(dòng)詞或形容詞被用作名詞的現(xiàn)象。比如動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)成名詞：discovery-discovery， move-movement， refuse-refusal，又比如形容詞轉(zhuǎn)成名詞：careless-carelessness， difficult-difficulty， intense-intensity。那么什么情況下，我們需要進(jìn)行名詞化呢?

名師講解：托福寫作用詞要注意什么

A 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的賓語(yǔ)部分

原句：I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.

名詞化：I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

B 結(jié)合被動(dòng)形式

原句：If people decide without enough persuasive information，...

名詞化：If a decision is made without enough persuasive information，...

C 取代諸如從句中“the fact that”的用法

原句：The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.

名詞化：My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.

更好的名詞化：a. When I denied his accusations， I impressed the jury.

b. In denying his accusations， I impressed the jury.

D 名詞化部分用在there is/are的后面

原句：We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.

名詞化：There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.

原句：The floods considerably eroded the land.

名詞化：There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.

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然而，有些時(shí)候，在我們的思維方式中認(rèn)為理所應(yīng)當(dāng)使用“名詞化”時(shí)，老外認(rèn)為是沒有必要的。比如：

A 名詞化部分跟在動(dòng)詞后面

原句(名詞化“冗余”)：The police conducted an investigation into the matter.

改后：The police investigated the matter.

B 名詞化部分作為主語(yǔ)

原句：Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.

改后：We discussed a tax cut.

C 連續(xù)進(jìn)行名詞化

原句：a. First， she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.

b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.

改后：First， she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.

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D 連接部分名詞化

原句：Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.

改后：They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.

原句：The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.

改后：Even though the motor housing was unstable， the research staff completed the field trials.

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