新通教師馬富麗親傳雅思作文高分技巧

寫作對(duì)于雅思寫作以及國(guó)內(nèi)外各種考試都是考察的一個(gè)重要方面。而對(duì)于中國(guó)學(xué)生而言，寫作，口語(yǔ)這種輸出性的能力是有很大欠缺的。同學(xué)們?cè)趥淇嫉臅r(shí)候都很頭疼，到底我該怎么備考，到底我該寫成怎樣的文章就能取得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)呢?那下邊馬老師就來(lái)為大家講解分析一下到底什么樣的雅思作文就是好作文，什么樣的作文可能得到高分。

一、考官青睞有邏輯的風(fēng)格

寫作其實(shí)很注重邏輯分析，條理清楚的文章更為考官青睞。

作文是寫作解說(shuō)文性質(zhì)的書面產(chǎn)出，不同于一般的記述，除了要把其中的數(shù)據(jù)表達(dá)出來(lái)，更重要的是要進(jìn)行分析。有部分同學(xué)將小作文寫成純粹的數(shù)據(jù)羅列，也就是我們常說(shuō)的一鍋粥，是不可能得高分的。

寫作的時(shí)候除了要把題目給出的信息寫全之外，還要注意用詞的準(zhǔn)確和用句的得當(dāng)，要用好的語(yǔ)言把整篇作文組織成有條理、有邏輯的文章，如果單單只是把題目給出的東西寫下來(lái)，沒有邏輯的文章是不能打動(dòng)人心的。

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二、精彩的作文開頭

俗話說(shuō)：好的開始是成功的一般。好的作文開頭也是雅思寫作中很重要的一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)，一般在評(píng)分的時(shí)候，考官看到的是你的作文開頭，如果你的開頭能另考官眼前一亮的話，你拿高分的幾率就上升了。

很多考生拿到作文考題都不知道如何動(dòng)筆去寫開頭段，有的會(huì)把題目原封不動(dòng)抄下來(lái)，但如果這樣做，在統(tǒng)計(jì)作文字?jǐn)?shù)時(shí)，第一段就不被統(tǒng)計(jì)在內(nèi)了。

作文的第一段是情景鋪墊，建議考生在這一段要點(diǎn)明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景。作文的首段通常包含以下幾個(gè)方面：

1. 場(chǎng)景或背景信息，即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon。

2. 一些人的觀點(diǎn)(some people’s opinion)，這部分在改寫文章首段時(shí)可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情況來(lái)安排。

3. 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要。

在寫作中考慮到字?jǐn)?shù)的合理安排，第一段最好寫3-5句話，大約40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說(shuō)完。

三、雅思寫作的套路和辭藻

并不是詞匯量少就一定寫不出高分文章�？荚嚂r(shí)不要刻意的去追求詞匯多樣化，熟練準(zhǔn)確的運(yùn)用單詞比生拼硬湊好單詞更重要。

雅思作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)里有一項(xiàng)是關(guān)于詞匯要求的。這一點(diǎn)不僅包括詞匯多樣性，更包括詞匯的準(zhǔn)確使用。所以對(duì)于平時(shí)花了大把時(shí)間去背單詞的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，不但要能認(rèn)識(shí)，而且關(guān)于它的用法，詞性和拼寫也需要熟練掌握，這是雅思寫作中必備的條件之一。

雅思作文更重要的是你有沒有切題的觀點(diǎn)，有沒有清晰的文章結(jié)構(gòu)(這反映了你的思路是否清晰)，在保證這兩點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上再去思考詞匯的出色應(yīng)用才是正確的選擇。沒有這兩點(diǎn)詞匯再好也白搭.這就象建房子, 如果你壓根不知道要建一座什么樣的房子(觀點(diǎn)是什么),不知道房子的結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)該怎么搭建(結(jié)構(gòu)怎么安排), 你手中有再多的磚塊(詞匯)也沒用。

四、不要盲目背范文

大家一定主要參考國(guó)外正宗的老外版本作文，不用用國(guó)內(nèi)那些老師出的材料。那些材料里有太多的中文習(xí)慣和中文式英語(yǔ)�？凑�宗老外寫的文章條理又清晰，又容易懂。又沒有多少生僻字，那是上品。

大家不要背范文，主要是練習(xí)寫作的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)。邏輯合理，內(nèi)容順暢，而不是堆砌華麗的辭藻。說(shuō)實(shí)話，我都很難讀懂那些下載的范文，看半天沒明白他們具體的觀點(diǎn)，盡是廢話，這是大忌。作文一定要觀點(diǎn)鮮明，邏輯嚴(yán)緊，結(jié)構(gòu)流暢，詞匯簡(jiǎn)單(不要過于簡(jiǎn)單也不要過于華麗)，文章中體現(xiàn)出簡(jiǎn)單和復(fù)合句，這就可以了�？捶段牡闹饕�作用是了解觀點(diǎn)。

或許雅思作文寫作技巧還有很多很多，但是以上的觀點(diǎn)對(duì)雅思考生的幫助都非常大，雅思寫作是有技巧的，但也不只是技巧，只要你是有實(shí)力的，再加上技巧和知道一些注意事項(xiàng)，你的雅思寫作拿高分那是沒有問題的。

現(xiàn)在就為大家呈現(xiàn)一篇較好的雅思范文供大家欣賞。

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Write about the following topic:

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, it is common to see advertisements on television or on billboards in the streets. Some people think that advertising boosts the sales of goods and encourages people to buy things they do not necessarily need. This argument contains some truth. In my country, advertising companies often produce advertisements featuring popular actors or singers to induce people, especially youngsters, to acquire goods which their favourite actor or singer seems to endorse, whether they need the products or not.

On the one hand, on the television screen a product is always made to look attractive and of good quality. As a result, people often purchase such goods upon impulse. Furthermore, as the number of consumers of a particular product increases under the impact of a persistent advertising campaign, others may be drawn into the trend, creating a large market for products which do not satisfy the real needs of society.

On the other hand, there are various counterarguments to these objections: The decision to make a purchase is a matter of personal choice. Advertising may not be the main cause of consumption habits. Individuals have their own preferences, and if they have enough disposable income it is entirely up to them how they use it. Also, it is doubtful if anyone can have the authority to judge whether goods for sale are really needed by society or not. Finally, as there is always only a limited amount of disposable income for anyone, people try to manage their budgets as best as they can. Advertising can seldom persuade people to spend money that they need for more urgent things, or to spend money that they do not have (for instance, by buying in installments).

In conclusion, as buyers have their own strong opinions and views on what constitutes good quality and on what they need and do not need, it is better to leave them to make their own decisions. It is difficult to claim that everyone is swayed by advertising and always makes purchases impulsively. However, it is a good idea to put restraints on advertising aimed at children and inexperienced youngsters. Otherwise, they might be persuaded to buy goods that they do not need, or to spend money that they do not have!