雅思寫(xiě)作五宗罪！

對(duì)于雅思寫(xiě)作，很多學(xué)生都是湊字?jǐn)?shù)，覺(jué)得能完成兩篇總共400字的文章就萬(wàn)事大吉了，殊不知有些小的細(xì)節(jié)忽視掉，分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)受到大大的影響。

一：出現(xiàn)第二人稱you或your, 或第一人稱we

第二人稱代詞you和your也不要出現(xiàn)在雅思作文這樣的正式文體中，雅思作文的正文中盡量不要出現(xiàn)we這樣的第一人稱代詞，we can say, we must say這樣的句型搭配也是很不學(xué)術(shù)的。

When you go to school, you can always make some friends.

---When a person attends the school, he or she is likely to make some friends.

二：出現(xiàn)縮寫(xiě)

雅思是正式文體，不能出現(xiàn)任何形式的縮寫(xiě)，包括it’s, won’t etc.，e.g.在內(nèi)。尤其要提醒考生注意不要出現(xiàn)縮寫(xiě)形式can’t，改為cannot。

It’s important for teenagers to follow parents' rules.

---It is crucial for teenagers to follow parents' rules.

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三：個(gè)別代表整體

雅思考試中不要舉自己或者身邊親朋好友的事例，這會(huì)大大削弱你文章的客觀性和說(shuō)服力。

Disobeying parents bring many troubles. Take my cousin for example, he never listen to my aunt's suggestion and play computer games for many hours, his scores are very low.

---For example, if children refuse to obey parents’orders and spend too many hours on playing games, they might have lower scores.

四：詞匯口語(yǔ)化

既然是寫(xiě)作，那么肯定不能夠太過(guò)隨意。例如不要出現(xiàn)As we all know，這樣的短語(yǔ)過(guò)于口語(yǔ)化。

We should invest lots of money in education, so kids would learn more things.

---In order to improve education, a large amount of fund should be invested in this sector.

五：有個(gè)人強(qiáng)烈的感情

雅思寫(xiě)作本身就是議論文，需要以論點(diǎn)論據(jù)說(shuō)話，而不是強(qiáng)加個(gè)人的感情。

Air travel saves us time. How convenient it is!

- --The advent of air travel strengthens the efficiency. It is indeed a time-saving/ convenient transport.

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