托福寫作：要想獲高分這些問題要避免

托福寫作很多問題都是影響到最后的結(jié)果的，這些有的很基礎(chǔ)也有的很難應(yīng)付，不過新托福寫作中要想有個(gè)好成績克服這些是一定要在托福寫作備考中做到的，下面來看看。

拼寫錯(cuò)誤

這里的拼寫錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的手誤，而是本身對(duì)托福寫作詞匯拼寫記憶的錯(cuò)誤。

In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

judgement應(yīng)改為judgment

用詞不當(dāng)

學(xué)生們?cè)谕懈�寫作備考中或多或少都�?huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。

In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

problems應(yīng)改為questions

亂用大詞

First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn't too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題：

1)該新托福寫作題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能連用的;

3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

表達(dá)中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

該句的表達(dá)過于中式化。

表意重復(fù)

They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

The show is so compelling but attractive.

compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。

固定用法錯(cuò)誤

To some extends, I agree with the author's general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent

例證夸張

For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient's immediate death.

雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒有這么大。

成分多余

According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

該句中的shows that是多余的成分。

詞性混亂

However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing。

時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

新托福寫作備考中的大作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，除了拿過去事件作為例子，用過去時(shí)態(tài)。

Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

claimed應(yīng)該改為claim。

可以看出新托福寫作中存在的毛病可不少，這需要大家在托福寫作備考時(shí)就注意，改進(jìn)后才能讓大家的托福寫作有所進(jìn)步，希望各位能夠重視。

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