2014年11月1日雅思寫作解析及語料庫(kù)

Some people think that it is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy，to what extent do you agree or disagree?有人認(rèn)為，做一份不喜歡的工作不如暫時(shí)待業(yè)，是否同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。

雅思寫作核心類型：

1. 是否同意觀點(diǎn)

2. 討論兩種觀點(diǎn)

3. 分析問題解決問題或者分析影響解決問題

4. 利弊討論或者先原因分析再利弊討論

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評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) = 高分指南

1. Task Achievement / Response.

2. Coherence and cohesion

3. Lexical Resource

4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy

我押題的題目：大學(xué)生擇業(yè)難的影響和解決策略

失業(yè)的影響 = 失業(yè)對(duì)于年輕人的弊端

1. 經(jīng)濟(jì)沒有保障，心中沒有自信，幸福指數(shù)下降;家人的擔(dān)憂;社會(huì)的不穩(wěn)定因素。

2. 個(gè)體性成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)驗(yàn)：孤獨(dú)，自卑，社交方面力不從心。相反，有工作，良好的人脈關(guān)系是幸福的一種源泉。

相反的邏輯：有工作，哪怕是不感興趣的工作的利好：

1. 經(jīng)濟(jì)沒有保障，心中有自信，經(jīng)濟(jì)和精神上獨(dú)立，幸福指數(shù)提高;父母不必?fù)?dān)憂。

2. 有工作，有良好的人脈關(guān)系，朋友是幸福幸福的一種源泉。例子展開，以我為例，我的夢(mèng)想是旅行美食家，但是，我20歲，我是兼職教師，教師是安身立命的方式，不是職業(yè)追求，但是，我愛上了這份工作，我有職業(yè)成就感，友誼的增加。結(jié)論，興趣是可以培養(yǎng)的。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：

關(guān)于是否同意一種觀點(diǎn)的提問是雅思，托福共有的駁論文寫法。

駁論文寫作思路：三分讓步，七分反駁。

作家立場(chǎng)：做一份不太喜歡的工作比待業(yè)失業(yè)值得推薦。

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范文：

首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)：

The proportion of one’s life allocating to work is very high，therefore，acceptance about one's career must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life, in this sense, job contentment is indeed crucial for people’s happiness. One of the characteristics of modern work is that people enjoy more freedom in their career options. A heated debate is that a jobless situation is superior to embarking on a job that one takes less interest in. Personally speaking, provided that the work is not that boring or unacceptable, even the dullest job, is to most people, less painful than idleness.

解析：

Provided that the work is not excessive in amount, even the dullest job, is to most people, less painful than idleness. 假如工作不是特別令人厭倦的或者不可接受的話，即使是最枯燥的工作也比無所事事要強(qiáng)。

二段： 反駁段：論據(jù)和例證展開證明作家立場(chǎng)

For a start, working, even though we take less interest in, by occupying time so constructively, makes one contented and with no time for boredom. Besides, many benefits ensue, securing a job enables one to be independent both economically and spiritually. To be the bread-winner of the family not only brings about personal sense of security but also effectively harmonize family relationship because a stable job is, to many parents, a kind of spiritual consolation. Plus, one has better personal resources to draw on by taking up a job, a well-connected interpersonal relationship is definitely an indispensable source of well-being. My personal story could justify my stand, I, originally, have no alternative but to work as a freelance English teacher though my dream career is a professional self-traveler, however, the sense of career fulfillment gradually grew on me when my painstaking efforts helped many ambitious young adults realize their dreams. Most importantly, my circle of friends has been greatly enlarged.

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解析：

1. Working，by occupying time so constructively, makes one contented and with no time for boredom. 因?yàn)楣ぷ魈顫M了時(shí)間的空隙，使人心滿意足，再也沒有無聊之感。

2. One has better personal resources to draw on by taking up a job 工作使人擁有良好的人脈資源。

3. A well-connected interpersonal relationship is definitely an indispensable source of well-being. 良好的人際關(guān)系是幸福不可缺少的源泉。
三段：讓步段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性 + 加以反駁

To be sure, I have to concede that it is a success if one can combine personal interest with career choice. After all, interest is the best simulation of work. It is conceivable that our infinite potential could be tapped and our devotion of work could be strengthened if we can zero in on what our hearts desire. By contrast, we might feel a little bit bored and gloomy when we undertake a job only for the purpose earning a decent living. That is why a number of people prefer to be out-of-work rather than reluctantly choose one job that agonizes them. What I want to refute, however, is that a man with great wisdom should, first of all, land a job, then, opt for dream work, and finally carve out his own career if possible.

解析：

1. land a job 找到工作

2. zero in on專注于……

3. A number of people prefer to be out-of-work rather than reluctantly choose one job that agonizes them.很多人寧可自己待業(yè)也不喜歡違背意愿做自己不喜歡的工作。

4. What I want to refute, however, is that a man with great wisdom should, first of all, land a job, then, opt for dream work, and finally carve out his own career if possible. 我想反駁的是，對(duì)于智者而言，先就業(yè)，后擇業(yè)，如有可能自我創(chuàng)業(yè)才是人生的成功。

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)

Overall, my stand is that it is up to us to find the ways and means to ideal career each of us seek and long for. However, a stable job is to a college leaver or unemployed youngster what water is to fish.

解析：

It is up to us to find the ways and means to find ideal career each of us seek and long for我們要自己找到追求渴望的理想的事業(yè)。

A stable job is to a college leaver or unemployed youngster what water is to fish. 一份穩(wěn)定的工作對(duì)于大學(xué)畢業(yè)的新鮮人或者失業(yè)的年輕人就如同水對(duì)于魚。

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