雅思作文一般結(jié)尾段需要寫兩到三句話。雅思作文結(jié)尾段應包括一個表示總結(jié)的signal word。例如,In conclusion, In summary, Overall,to be concluded,to summarise, to sum up等等。
雅思作文一般結(jié)尾段需要寫兩到三句話。雅思作文結(jié)尾段應包括一個表示總結(jié)的signal word。例如,In conclusion, In summary, Overall,to be concluded,to summarise, to sum up等等。這一系列詞雖然已經(jīng)泛濫,但其實也沒法推陳出新,而且創(chuàng)新也不會加分。
>>>下列總結(jié)了一些表示總結(jié)的表達:
To summarise / to sum up
In conclusion / to be concluded
On balance /overall / on the whole
To return to my original idea
This is a complex issue with no clear answers…..
If we look at both sides of the argument,…..
雅思作文結(jié)尾段的第一句話要重審自己的觀點;對于觀點類文章,可直接轉(zhuǎn)述自己的thesis statement;對于論述類文章,如果主體段采取的是四段論,這就是你要表達觀點的地方;對于報告類文章,一般無需表達自己觀點,所以不用重審觀點。
雅思作文結(jié)尾段的第二句話要做總結(jié),把每個主體段的主要內(nèi)容做簡要概括,不要包含任何具體例子或解釋。
>>>Sample conclusion:
In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it is good or bad?
Conclusion 1.
In my opinion it is unjust that a sports star such as David Beckham earns far more money than a doctor whose work is invaluable in saving peoples’ lives. The principle reason for saying this is that the doctor clearly makes a much more valuable contribution to society than someone who is involved in the entertainment industry.
Conclusion 2.
I personally believe that in the ideal world someone’s income would relate to their value to society. However, in the modern world, it is almost unavoidable that the famous will have the highest incomes because of their media exposure.
對比以上兩個雅思作文的結(jié)尾,哪一個更好呢?顯然是第二個,首先第一個結(jié)尾出現(xiàn)了具體的例子和細節(jié),其次第一個結(jié)尾并沒有完全回答題目的兩個問題,只概括了自己的觀點,這是不是一個好的趨勢,而并沒有回答發(fā)生這種情況的原因。
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