2014年6月28日雅思寫作真題及思路拓展

(本次小作文為柱形+表格，難度中等。本次大作文題目為With the increase of demand of energy sources of oil and gas, should people look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas? )

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A類大作文

作文題目：With the increase of demand of energy sources of oil and gas, should people look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

題型類別：優(yōu)劣勢(shì)討論類

題材類別：環(huán)境/社會(huì)

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寫作思路拓展

2014年6月28號(hào)雅思大作文思路分析

With the increase of demand of energy resources of oil and gas, should people look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

如今，能源短缺，尤其是能源開采問(wèn)題，是各國(guó)政府面臨的一個(gè)重大問(wèn)題。一些人建議在偏遠(yuǎn)以及未經(jīng)開采的地區(qū)開發(fā)化石燃料，我對(duì)此持有不同的觀點(diǎn)，此種做法對(duì)開采區(qū)域的破壞也是顯而易見(jiàn)的。

首先，在偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)開采化石燃料所產(chǎn)生的直接問(wèn)題體現(xiàn)在生存環(huán)境的進(jìn)一步惡化。毋庸置疑，當(dāng)?shù)氐纳鷳B(tài)體系以及生態(tài)環(huán)境會(huì)遭到極大的危害。必須承認(rèn)地是，作為經(jīng)濟(jì)的推動(dòng)力，全世界對(duì)能源需求日益整張，因此，能源供應(yīng)與能源需求的差距也在加大。然而解決這一問(wèn)題，應(yīng)該研發(fā)節(jié)約能源，以及有效利用能源的新技術(shù)，在能源枯竭之前，而不是繼續(xù)這種惡性循環(huán)。

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其次，解決能源需求問(wèn)題，行之有效的方式是可替代能源的使用。這是一個(gè)使得我們有一個(gè)更加安全更加清潔的生存環(huán)境的最好的選擇。幾乎每一年，政府都要投入大量的資金解決由化石燃料引發(fā)的環(huán)境問(wèn)題，如空氣污染以及水污染。如果這些錢投入到使用可替代的能源，環(huán)境問(wèn)題會(huì)解決。

必須承認(rèn)地，在偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)開采也有其積極影響，加快當(dāng)?shù)氐慕?jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，生存環(huán)境以及生活條件的改善。然而，與其優(yōu)點(diǎn)相比較而言，有更多的明顯的問(wèn)題。例如，使本已脆弱的生態(tài)環(huán)境進(jìn)一步惡化，某些物種消失，極大地破壞對(duì)生態(tài)平衡甚至影響全球的氣候.

總而言之，使用對(duì)環(huán)境不產(chǎn)生污染以及促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的可替代能源對(duì)于減輕能源危機(jī)有積極的作用，而不是繼續(xù)在偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)開采化石燃料。

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