實(shí)例解析：如何運(yùn)用雅思寫作地圖題的高分句型

近年來，非數(shù)據(jù)類圖表在雅思寫作小作文的考試當(dāng)中，比例逐漸上升。小編與大家分享一篇“變遷類”雅思寫作地圖題范文，抽絲剝繭為大家分析雅思寫作地圖題的高分句型運(yùn)用方法。

請(qǐng)看下面一幅“變遷類”雅思寫作地圖題：

在以上的雅思寫作地圖題中，第一幅圖為靜態(tài)地理位置描寫，并不算難；但當(dāng)描述到第二幅圖的時(shí)候，許多同學(xué)徒有一些表示“擴(kuò)建”“縮減”“被替代”的詞匯，卻不知道到底如何寫出雅思寫作高分句子�，F(xiàn)在就是用句型讓他們發(fā)揮作用的時(shí)刻了，我們一起來精讀一段雅思寫作范文：

In the present-day town, a great deal changed.
　　分析：主題句，概述這個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)經(jīng)歷了很大的變遷。

Perhaps the most noticeable change are those relating to transportation. Our modern-day needs are very different and so the roads have been improved and traffic lights, a roundabout and a zebra crossing have been added, as well as an extra road. Increased traffic means that a car park has now replaced Goode Farm and the fields that are located at the top of the 1700 map.
　　分析：此段首先采用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，最顯客觀。分別用‘have been done’的結(jié)構(gòu)，即現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)搭配被動(dòng)語態(tài)，描述道路被修繕了，安全島和斑馬線被增建了，時(shí)態(tài)和句型都有加分。其后，一個(gè)停車場(chǎng)取代了原來的Goode農(nóng)場(chǎng)，此處句式進(jìn)行變化，回歸主動(dòng)的敘述，A取代B的句型，毫無重復(fù)。這一段，我們積累的必備句型為被動(dòng)式：A have been v-ed (eg. added/removed etc.) 主動(dòng)式：B have replaced C

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Housing is another area where many changes have been made. While in 1700 there were few houses, now there are rows of houses and a block of flats instead of the stables.
　　分析：總起“房屋是另一個(gè)變化所在”，然后采取時(shí)間前后對(duì)比描述，’While in XX there were..., now there are...’ 一前一后的對(duì)比，十分清晰，這同樣可以作為重點(diǎn)句型的積累，但是特別注意描述過去的情況用過去時(shí)，描述現(xiàn)在的情況回到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

A further development is the supermarket and the hotel, which have been extended.
　　分析：前面已經(jīng)用過對(duì)比句型，為了避免重復(fù)，范文再次為小烤鴨指引航向，一個(gè)非限定性定語從句：’..., which has/have been...’的結(jié)構(gòu)，將變化之處再次明確表達(dá)出來，讓人眼前一亮。此句可總結(jié)為’A further development is the..., which have been...’ 

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