2014年10月18日雅思寫作真題解析

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2014年10月18日雅思寫作真題回憶

小作文：流程圖， 熏魚制作的8個(gè)過程

大作文：It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the other culture. we can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet, to what extent do you agree or disagree？

寫作思路：讓步反駁：

作家立場(chǎng)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)瀏覽圖片以及讀書看電影不能代替親自游覽：

文章布局（1）：

首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

二段：第一次支持作家立場(chǎng)以及細(xì)節(jié)論據(jù)展開

三段：第二次支持作家立場(chǎng)以及細(xì)節(jié)論據(jù)展開

四段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性 ＋ 加以反駁

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)�。�　總結(jié)理由

文章布局（2）

首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)：

二段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性（最多兩點(diǎn)，可以例證）

三段：反駁原題觀點(diǎn)的不合理性（二點(diǎn)或者三點(diǎn)反駁）

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)

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2014年10月18日雅思寫作原創(chuàng)范文賞析：

首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

Such is human nature to explore the unknown and deepen our insight into exotic cultures. In comparison with feasting our eyes on gorgeous landscape in person， many people can get to know foreign countries by reading magazines，appreciating movies，or browsing eye-catching pictures on line, so a heated debate springs up as to whether being well-travelled is still the best way to enrich our knowledge about unfamiliar places. Personally, indirect way to deepen our understating about unfamiliar cities or foreign countries can never be superior to traveling in person.

解析：

1.feast our eyes on v盡情欣賞

2.deepen our insight into exotic culture v 加深對(duì)于異國文化的洞察

3.to be well-traveled v游歷廣泛

二段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性

So prevailing are movies, magazines and the Internet that few of us can avoid being swayed by them. It is true that people used to rely on direct tour for cultural exploration and visual enjoyment, now people have many more choices largely because of the availability of electronic media or printed books. To illustrate, Tourist is one of my favorite magazines, which usually gives a detailed introduction and vivid description on local conditions and customs of various countries. My insight into foreign countries has been greatly deepened by reading this wonderful tourism magazine.

解析：

1.be swayed by 被影響

2.detailed introduction and vivid description 細(xì)節(jié)介紹和生動(dòng)描繪

3.wonderful tourism magazine精彩的旅行雜志

三段：反駁原題觀點(diǎn)的不合理性：

What I want to rebut, however, is that indirect experience is definitely not the ideal one to enrich our experience of the world. First, traveling exposes us to new places and cultures. It is good for us to read about distant countries, but it is even better to visit our dream cities or nations in person. What we learn by meeting the people and absorbing the cultures of these places is something we could not learn simply by reading books, watching movies or browsing the Internet. Further, those who never travel to the outside world, usually, are rather restricted in terms of crisis-solving competence，decision-making ability and interpersonal skills even though they might get some indirect information from the mass media, conversely, those who spend time in exploring the world tend to be more well-informed, sharp-minded, sociable and tenacious. From our lives, it is easy to find out a lot of examples to prove that many people familiarize themselves with new countries and deepen their insight into different cultures by going abroad.

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解析：

1.enrich our experience of the world 豐富我們的人生閱歷

2.crisis-solving competence ，decision-making ability and interpersonal skills 危機(jī)處理能力，自我決策略能力以及人際交往能力

3.well-informed, sharp-minded, sociable and tenacious 見多識(shí)廣的, 思維敏銳的，善于社交的，堅(jiān)韌頑強(qiáng)的

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由：

In conclusion, drawing on the electronic media or printed books might be a good approach to understand different places or countries, however, traveling in person deserves more praises in terms of broadening our mental horizons and enriching our experience of the world.

解析：

1.draw on  利用

2.in terms of 在……方面

3.broaden our mental horizons 拓寬視野

全文點(diǎn)評(píng)：

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