教師版：2014年10月18日雅思寫作解析

小作文：流程圖，8個stages寫smoked fish的制作過程;

小作文這周如預料考到流程圖，上周（10.11）考中表格，再上次（10.2）考中柱形圖，再前一周（9.27）繼續(xù)表格，再就是9月20號的地圖題，間隔四周。那么餅形圖和線圖必將是下次小作文準備的重點題型。

大作文：It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the other culture. we can learn as much as from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

我們現(xiàn)在沒有必要去其他地方旅游來學習當?shù)匚幕�。從書里，電影里和網(wǎng)上我們也能獲得同樣多的相應信息。

這周的大作文沒有難到學生下不了手，旅游學習文化這個話題在社會生活類，政府類都有接觸，并且本文提到從書里，電影里和網(wǎng)絡里學習其他地方的文化，又是大家熟悉的多元媒體和科技類話題。對于烤鴨來說，詞匯和思路應該不缺，但是本文的難點是學生想不到比較親自旅游和從多元媒體獲得文化的差異；并且此文容易寫的空洞，抽象，沒有具體具象地展現(xiàn)兩種方式學習文化的各自優(yōu)缺點。

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這里提供一些思路，僅供參考：

1. 觀點傾向于親身旅游來增長見識是很有必要的，不能被多元媒體等方式來取代。

2. 親身旅游不等同于只是乘坐交通工具和住旅館；而是通過和當?shù)厝说恼Z言交流，品嘗當?shù)厥澄锏然顒�，我們不僅獲得對當?shù)匚幕�的一手認識， 而且我們在旅游過程中也能與當?shù)鼐用窈推渌�游客進行溝通聯(lián)系，這些是多元媒體這種二手信息里沒有的并且缺乏的。

3. 親身旅游能夠親密接觸到大自然和人文景觀，而目前電影電視里，就算是I-MAX和其他先進的電腦技術發(fā)展都還是有限的，對于人們認知文化有著負面影響。

詞匯：

1. Interaction:互動

2. Sense of isolation:疏離感

3. Landscape:風景，景色

4. Multi-media:多元媒體

5. Three dimensional:立體的

6. Recognition:認識，認知

7. Undermine: 破壞，危害

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范文參考：

Granted that cultures in various countries start to resemble one another, which is by no means to a large extent, it is still worthwhile to travel to other countries to appreciate what can only be obtained on a foreign soil.

Superficially, the world’s culture is merging faster than we expected or could tolerate. That is partly why people get the same experience no matter where they go. If travel means to get on a plane, to stay in some hotel, to go to some museums and to do some shopping, then it could be quite alike in all major cities around the world. But traveling should not be limites to this narrow sense. It means much more and therefore renders each trip a new experience.

To travel is to get to know the local people. People may wear the same clothes, eat the same kinds of food and do similar jobs, but they are different from country to country, an ordinary Chinese could hardly believe that a totally stranger in America will dismantle his own bike and replace your ruptured tyre with one of his own if he has never been to that country. Media reports and second-hand information can never compare with your personal interaction with the local people during your stay there.

Apart from knowing the people ,traveling affords you incomparable opportunities to appreciate the natural beauties of a foreign country. Admittedly, the internet, satellite TV and multi-media technology are bringing the world closer to us. It is now easy to view exotic landscapes on a  screen in the comfort of your home; virtual reality technology promises three dimensional experiences at the touch of a fingertip. However, is this various experience really satisfying? Hardly. Travel brings us closer to nature, the wonders of which can only be truly appreciated first hand.

There is hope that technology will one day supply all the experiences we ever wish to have, which sounds exhilarating yet perhaps also disconcerting-it reminds me of the movie The Matrix. Also, people will remain unique enough to excite our desire to meet them in person.

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