吐血整理：托福寫作中被秒殺的開頭！

每一位參加托福寫作考試的同學(xué)都希望有一個“鳳頭”，因而絞盡腦汁去“創(chuàng)作”，結(jié)果知道成績，卻是感到滿滿的挫敗感！小編在此帶來吐血整理：托福寫作中被秒殺的開頭，想要托福高分，大家可要仔細(xì)繞開！

托福寫作中被秒殺的開頭1：過分簡單沒有重點(diǎn)(吐血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

托福寫作中被秒殺的開頭2：用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn) (吐血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

托福寫作中被秒殺的開頭3：意思重復(fù)原地踏步(吐血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

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典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

托福寫作中被秒殺的開頭4：中國俗語胡亂翻譯(吐血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

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Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

以上就是托福寫作禁忌，絕對不可出現(xiàn)的托福寫作開頭的介紹。這些錯誤大家要十分注意，經(jīng)常會出現(xiàn)在我們的托福寫作中，希望同學(xué)們謹(jǐn)慎繞開哦！

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