托福寫作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤匯總

對(duì)于許多中國(guó)考生來(lái)說(shuō)，托福寫作是很頭疼的一部分，其實(shí)很多考上在托福寫作時(shí)經(jīng)常會(huì)犯一些小的錯(cuò)誤，會(huì)直接影響托福寫作成績(jī)，下面是為大家整理的托福寫作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤，或者會(huì)對(duì)大家的備考有所幫助。

1、用詞不當(dāng)

學(xué)生們?cè)谛峦懈�寫作備考中或多或少都�?huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。

In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

problems應(yīng)改為questions

2、拼寫錯(cuò)誤

這里的拼寫錯(cuò)誤不是指在托福考試時(shí)候的手誤，而是本身對(duì)詞匯拼寫記憶的錯(cuò)誤。

In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

judgement應(yīng)改為judgment

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3、亂用大詞

First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn't too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問(wèn)題：

1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能連用的;

3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

4、表達(dá)中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

該句的表達(dá)過(guò)于中式化。

5、表意重復(fù)

They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

The show is so compelling but attractive.

compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。

6、例證夸張

For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient's immediate death.

雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒(méi)有這么大。

7、固定用法錯(cuò)誤

To some extends, I agree with the author's general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent

8、詞性混亂

However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing。

9、成分多余

According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

該句中的shows that是多余的成分。

10、時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

新托福寫作備考中的大作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，除了拿過(guò)去事件作為例子，用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。

Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

claimed應(yīng)該改為claim。

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