“讓步論證法”讓你的雅思寫(xiě)作上檔次

在雅思寫(xiě)作議論文中，常見(jiàn)的論證方法很多，如舉例子、解釋、類比、對(duì)比、列數(shù)據(jù)等，今天小編要給大家總結(jié)介紹一類在雅思寫(xiě)作論證中體現(xiàn)論證的全面性的方法，即“讓步論證法”。

首先我們來(lái)看幾個(gè)句型：1. As is granted, … However, convincing arguments have been made that …2.Opponents would argue that… However, …3. Although/ In spite of the fact that …， people tend to believe that …4. It is undeniable that …從以上三個(gè)句型，我們看出讓步就是先退一步承認(rèn)自己不同意的一個(gè)事實(shí)，再對(duì)其進(jìn)行反駁，如某人去面試，老板要拒絕聘請(qǐng)錄用這個(gè)員工，他會(huì)在拒絕前先說(shuō)一番承認(rèn)這個(gè)人在某些方面還不錯(cuò)的一些話，這就是讓步。這樣論證的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是更加全面的論證，不會(huì)一味的一邊倒，就片面的認(rèn)為一個(gè)事件的存在只有優(yōu)點(diǎn)或只有缺點(diǎn)，且論證也更有說(shuō)服力。這種論證方法常出現(xiàn)在討論類的單邊論證中，我們來(lái)看一個(gè)題目：

The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?針對(duì)這樣一個(gè)雅思寫(xiě)作題目，通過(guò)審題，題目要求考生探討圖書(shū)是否需要提供高科技媒體。根據(jù)分析，我們可以得出雅思寫(xiě)作單邊論證的結(jié)構(gòu)，同意提供多媒體。具體結(jié)構(gòu)參照如下：

Introduction: State my opinion

The hi-tech media should been provided by the public libraries.

Body: Ph 1 Making concession

Multimedia facilities are expensive.

Ph2 Reason one to support my opinion.

Hi-tech media can store information much longer than traditional means.

Ph3 Reason two to support my opinion

Visiting a library with multimedia access is much more interesting.

Conclusion: Restate my opinion

The investment is justified and should be encouraged.

從上述結(jié)構(gòu)我們看出作者的觀點(diǎn)是支持提供高科技媒體，但這個(gè)論證過(guò)程非常全面，它先在論證的第一代就退一步承認(rèn)其缺點(diǎn)，然后再就這一點(diǎn)進(jìn)行反駁，這個(gè)段落就是讓步段，參考之前提供句型，得出這一段：Opponents of a high-tech library would argue that multimedia facilities are expensive. This may be true to some extent, because a DVD player is often more expensive than a bookshelf. However, with immense storage capacity, these new high-tech media can actually save the most valuable resource-space.

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雅思寫(xiě)作讓步段還可以運(yùn)用到討論類另一種結(jié)構(gòu)中，筆者謂之雙邊傾向論證。我們通過(guò)一個(gè)具體的實(shí)例來(lái)解釋這種論證結(jié)構(gòu)以及讓步在其中的用法。

There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

老師建議此題一定要認(rèn)真審題，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)問(wèn)題模式對(duì)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有著直接的影響。它有兩問(wèn)，第一問(wèn)要回答手機(jī)的三個(gè)方面的問(wèn)題，第二問(wèn)優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)討論，結(jié)合這兩問(wèn)，得出文章結(jié)構(gòu)如下：

Introduction: State my opinion

The problems of mobile phones far exceed the merits.

Body: Ph 1 the benefits brought about by mobiles (Making concession)Convenient, functional

Ph2 the social, medial and technical problems of mobile phones

Conclusion: Restate my opinion

Although mobile phones have some benefits, the negative influences should not be overlooked.

看完結(jié)構(gòu)，不難理解雅思寫(xiě)作雙邊傾向的結(jié)構(gòu)即兩個(gè)方面優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)都提及，作者的觀點(diǎn)是傾向其中一方的，那么不同意的那一方的論證段就可以理解為讓步段。結(jié)合句式，我們可以寫(xiě)一下讓步段的topic sentence:It is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways. 接著可以列舉手機(jī)使用的幾個(gè)具體的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。這種雅思寫(xiě)作讓步和單邊論證讓步的區(qū)別是它可以不用直接在這個(gè)段落后面反駁。

雅思寫(xiě)作讓步段在論證過(guò)程中有著相當(dāng)廣泛的實(shí)戰(zhàn)意義，它可以幫助考生擴(kuò)展文章的字?jǐn)?shù)，達(dá)到要求，此外，它還能使得雅思寫(xiě)作論證過(guò)程更加全面，希望為雅思寫(xiě)作取得高分有切實(shí)的幫助。

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