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【題】Do you agreeor disagree with the following statement: Compared with the ability to make new friends easily, the ability to maintain friendship with a small group of people is more important and decides your happiness.

題型：對(duì)比題
　　論點(diǎn)：讓步
　　角度：原因挖掘

開(kāi)頭：保持老朋友間的友誼更為重要。（話題引入+他人觀點(diǎn)+明確立場(chǎng)+過(guò)渡）

As social creatures, people make friends all the time. Old friends serve as the emotional reliance while some newly made friends are of practical value. Thus, a debate confronts us here on which one is more important: the ability to maintain friendship or the ability to get to know new people? The way I see it, it is more meaningful that we are able to maintain long-term friendship with a handful of people. My reasons and examples are given below. (80 words)

中間段1：和少數(shù)固定幾個(gè)人的友誼比大量結(jié)識(shí)的新朋友更牢固和穩(wěn)定。（主題句+說(shuō)理論證+細(xì)節(jié)例子）

Firstly, friendship in a small circle is more solid and stable. For the sake of networking, a large number of people we get to know in various social occasions are actually so-called "situational friends" who just come and go in our life. Taking my father for example, he is a salesman with complicated social connections. I always find him socializing here and there, but he once told me that he could not even remember their names. Compared with those situational friends, I prefer a stable relationship with those who can give me a sense of secure. (96 words)

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中間段2：和少數(shù)固定朋友維持友誼能給你生活帶來(lái)更多的幫助。（主題句+說(shuō)理論證+細(xì)節(jié)例子）

Secondly, maintaining the friendship with a few people brings lasting and genuine benefits to our life. On account of our limited energy and time, we are unlikely to expand the circle of friends and invest in each one of them emotionally. In stead, if we sincerely focus on several people worth making friends with, they will treat us just like how we treat them. For example, I am not a person good at socializing, but I do have a couple of congenial friends whom I have known since primary school. We often visit each other and help each other. Together we make it easier to live in this world. (109 words)

讓步段：當(dāng)然，不是說(shuō)容易交朋友的能力就不重要，也有好處，比如有急事還是要認(rèn)識(shí)一些人幫忙會(huì)更順利。但是如果不穩(wěn)定投入，這些新朋友是經(jīng)不起時(shí)間考驗(yàn)的。（承認(rèn)漏洞+補(bǔ)漏）

Admittedly, I am not saying that the ability to make new friends quickly is not important. This kind of skill does have its value. For instance, when we are in troubles, new friends could probably help us out if they happened to be useful. However, in most cases, the relationship with new friends cannot withstand the test of time if both of us fail to persistently invest in each other emotionally and economically. (73words)

？結(jié)尾：重申觀點(diǎn)+歸納理由/升華主題

To put it in a nutshell, the ability to maintain lasting friendship with a few persons outweighs that of getting acquaintance with new people easily. As a famous quotes goes, "God gave us relatives, but thank God we can choose ourfriends." For friends, quantity does not matter, and what really matters is endurance and dependence. (56 words)

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