雅思考官滿分范文：評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的完美詮釋

正在準(zhǔn)備雅思考試的小烤鴨們都知道評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)意味著什么，它就像茫茫大海中引導(dǎo)船舶的燈塔，為他們指出正確的方向。在雅思寫作備考過程中，評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的作用不可小覷，對于四項(xiàng)要求：Task Response(Achievement)， Coherence and Cohesion，Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy的精確理解和解讀有助于讓考生的作文更加接近考官的要求，明確自己的寫作方向，對學(xué)習(xí)有幫助。本文將對雅思考官范文進(jìn)行解析 ，看看9分的文章如何出色地完成了其中的所有要求。

劍5 test 2

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at the important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

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My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

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作者：fully addresses all parts of the task，即談?wù)摿酥袛鄬W(xué)習(xí)一年的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn);同時(shí)presents a position：My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons(結(jié)尾段)，用對比及列舉可能出現(xiàn)的結(jié)果作為論據(jù)，緊扣題目，完成了with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas等要求。

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