2014年9月6日雅思寫作真題解析及范文

2014年9月6日雅思寫作真題解析及范文

2014年9月6日雅思寫作題目：

小作文：動態(tài)柱圖：4個國家40年來接受援助的對比

大作文：With major cities continue growing，are there any problems to young people? How to solve these problems?年輕人面對的問題以及如何解決?

雅思寫作真題解析：
　　可以談及的文章主題有——
　　1. 年輕人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大的原因和解決
　　2. 年輕人不健康的原因和解決
　　3. 大學(xué)生擇業(yè)難的原因和解決
　　4. 青少年犯罪的原因和解決

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相關(guān)題目1：Many people complain about workplace pressure. What can employers do to reduce the stress? What can the employees themselves do? Give your opinions by referring to your own experience.

雅思寫作范文1：

Pressure is always there in some form, whether in the workplace or in our personal lives. If you allow it to control your performance in a negative way, then it becomes stress. I would like to examine the cause of stress, which has led to many people staying off job or school, and offer possible solutions as follows. [58 words]

Firstly, do not overestimate your abilities. It is not uncommon that many arrogant people first overrate themselves before starting a task, then they stay off the job after having found it extremely difficult. These people are pessimistic ones. Actually if they knew who they are they would not place themselves in this plight. Take me for example, I am an architect working for a construction company. Whenever I am given an assignment, I would study it for a couple of days. If it is over my head I would recommend another more capable colleague to complete it. This is the way I am and consequently and more importantly, I never feel stressful at work.. [113 words]

Now let’s turn to academic issue. Everyone knows, stress occurs when you are being asked to do something you are not sure whether you can do. Nowadays, a great deal of students’ fears grow dramatically before the arrival of a big exam as a consequence of not being well prepared for it. Some of them who have flunked many times would rather drop out of school than suffer from humiliations and shame. I experienced tough times when I was a freshman in college. Later I discovered that sufficient preparation could provide me with confidence when commencing exams. Therefore, I stopped attending all social activities a week before the exam and was focused on notes taken in class. For this reason, I enjoyed my school life ever after. (127 words)

After all, we can never escape from the reality of every existence. To stay off job or school is the wrong attitude of which cowards deserve. (26words)

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相關(guān)題目2：In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

雅思寫作范文2：

When we read newspapers, our attention is always attracted by increasing unemployment rate in young graduates who are leaving college. In my opinion, there are many causes for this disquieting phenomenon and we should try to solve the problem.

Most companies would rather employ a low-educational specialized worker than a this-year’s graduate from a well-known university. For companies, they are more likely to choose the candidates with rich working experience. Apparently enough, the training for young graduates usually costs them a large quantity of time and money. In addition, the current education system brings on a lot of bookworms who are adept in theoretical but not practical knowledge. Therefore, it is hard for those graduates to complete the practical assignments successfully and smoothly. This is one major reason why many graduates find it to find suitable jobs.

An un-mandatory retirement age is another factor leading to the youth unemployment for college graduates. Along with the improving of working efficiency, proficient employees with rich and extensive working experience get retired at a much later age. In this case, for young graduates, there are fewer chances to get access to the jobs taken up by the older and more experienced.

However, the youth unemployment may cause serious social problems. Due to the gloomy job markets, college students may leave school before finishing their academic study, thus the higher education system will be challenged, and more seriously, the importance of higher education will be doubted. This will cause retrogression in education.

To solve this grave problem, both colleges and students should take some actions. On one hand, it is advisable for colleges to adjust courses more closely related to the future jobs. On the other hand, students in college, as future candidates for employment, should not only get a good command of professional knowledge but also take part in some practical exercises to be prepared for the future jobs. In addition, government may stage laws and regulations to assist graduates in finding jobs.

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