【秘籍】如何輕松拿下托福綜合寫(xiě)作20分？

很多托友在考綜合寫(xiě)作時(shí)，總是苦惱自己的聽(tīng)力不給力，導(dǎo)致自己的綜合寫(xiě)作部分總是徘徊在limited。不可否認(rèn)，綜合寫(xiě)作要得到4分或5分這樣的高分，聽(tīng)力的重要性不言而喻。但是，要得到3分原始分?jǐn)?shù)，也就是對(duì)應(yīng)我們量化后的分?jǐn)?shù)20分，聽(tīng)力真的有那么重要嗎? 我們來(lái)看一下ETS在《官方指南》中給出的一篇3分的綜合寫(xiě)作范文和范文評(píng)語(yǔ)，再下定論。

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Score 3 Response：

The lecturer provide the opposite opinion concerning what the article offered. The team work often bring negative effet. As we all know superficially, team work and team spirits are quite popular in today’s business world and also the fashionable terms. However, the lecturer find deeper and hiding results.

Firstly, the working results of team members can’t be fully valued. For example, if a team member does nothing in the process of team discussion, decision making and final pratice, his or her work delinquency will not be recognized because we only emphasize team work. Also, the real excellent and creative member’s work might be oblitetrated for the same reason.

Secondly, the team work might lose its value when team members are leading by several influential people in the group. One of the essential merits of team is to avoid the individule wrong. But one or two influential or persuasive people will make the team useless.

Thirdly, team work oftem become the excuse of taking responsibility. All in charge, nobody care.

All in all, what we should is the fully distinguish the advantages and disadvantages of a concept or widely used method. That is to keep the common sense.

Rater Comments:

The first point is clearly stated and accurately conveys the lecturer’s comments about team members who contributes little and team members who contribute a great deal. (第一點(diǎn)：有分論點(diǎn)有細(xì)節(jié)，但有些許語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤) The second point about influencers is somewhat error-prone or vague and non-idiomatic language , not fully explain the reason these influencers create problems.(第二大點(diǎn)：與聽(tīng)力有一點(diǎn)關(guān)系，但是表述模糊且沒(méi)有細(xì)節(jié)) The third point is not fully related to the passage and lecture, and the meaning is not clearly.(第三大點(diǎn)：完全與聽(tīng)力閱讀沒(méi)有關(guān)系，表達(dá)意思不清楚)

托福考試分?jǐn)?shù)始終在低分徘徊？來(lái)新通，五星名師一對(duì)一全面學(xué)習(xí)！

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上面Rater給出的評(píng)分，說(shuō)的通俗一點(diǎn)實(shí)際上是在做加法，也就是說(shuō)我們要得3分，要做到三點(diǎn)：1. 閱讀和寫(xiě)作的邏輯關(guān)系，2.寫(xiě)作和聽(tīng)力中的兩個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，3.一些細(xì)節(jié)。

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