2014年8月9日雅思寫作真題解析及雅思大作文范文

2014年8月9日雅思寫作真題

Task1：表格題，豎四橫三。
2001和2006年AUS三個地方的住宅類型（+other）所占的比例
澳大利亞三個地方的住所偏好比較

 Task2：舊題重現(xiàn) 

A類大作文是2011年7月30日的原題： Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, but others think the people should have freedom to choose sports activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人認為政府應該禁止年輕人們從事危險性的運動,有人認為人們有自由選擇自己喜歡的運動方式,討論兩種觀點?（舊題重現(xiàn)） 

2014年8月9日雅思寫作范文

首段：

Such is a human nature to explore and experience the unknown. A trend is that numerous people are fond of embarking on challenging sports events, such as mountain biking, rock climbing and scuba diving, especially among those dynamic young adults. Those who pursue excitement and the sense of refreshment in the dull routine daily life claim that life without risk is no life at all.(65)

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翻譯：探究和體驗未知的世界是人之本性, 當下, 很多人,尤其是精力充沛的年輕人, 喜歡從事充滿挑戰(zhàn)的競技體育項目, 例如山地自行車, 攀巖和海底潛水等。那些喜歡在枯燥的，日復一日的生活中追求刺激和新鮮的人聲稱, 人生沒有冒險就不能稱其為人生。

點評：首段自然開篇，沒有爭議焦點和寫作意圖，沒有模版痕跡，留下想象空間。

二段：我的口吻談及極限運動的利好：

Granted, a great many virtues could be gained via undertaking those risky or demanding sports activities. Primarily, the extreme adventures can be taken as is a sort of effective way to help players relieve their pressure and relax their mood， because the occupied modern life often deprive one's right of seeking relaxation. The popularity of bungee jumping accounts for risky sports' significant function in terms of reducing stress. Imaginably, one's working or study efficiency could be highly enhanced after doing his or her favorite sports events. Moreover, not only can the extreme adventures exert wholesome impacts, but also it could foster one's skills, chasten one's tenacity and forge one's frustration toleration. Some extreme adventures，such as rock climbing and surfing， requires high techniques or much perseverance. Ultimately, the extreme adventures could be developed into tempting tourism items, which could generate immense economic value.(143)

翻譯：的確，從事極限運動利好很多。 第一, 這是一種極佳的方式幫助運動者緩解壓力, 愉悅心情, 因為緊張的現(xiàn)代生活已經(jīng)剝奪了人們放松休閑的權利。蹦極運動的流行就解釋了運動在緩解壓力方面的積極作用。可以想象, 運動之后,人們的工作學習效率都會提高。另外, 極限運動不僅僅有益健康, 還能培養(yǎng)人的技巧, 磨礪人的堅韌性以及鑄造人的挫折忍受力, 一些運動, 例如攀巖和沖浪, 就需要人有極高的技巧和毅力。 最后, 極限運動可以開發(fā)成熱門的旅游項目, 創(chuàng)造巨大的經(jīng)濟價值。

三段：談及極限運動的弊端：

Nonetheless, problems invariably ensue. One possible downside is that some perilous sports activities might become the roots of injuries and agonies. There exist high levels of injuries, which sometimes disable players and even ruin their whole lives. Another adverse aspect is that some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. To illustrate, boxing involves excessive violence and bloody contents so that it imposes adverse impact on adolescent TV viewers, namely, it might arouse their sadistic impulse.(78)

翻譯：然而, 問題隨之而來。第一， 危險性極高的運動可能會導致意外受傷和痛苦。這些意外有可能導致人的殘疾或者毀掉人的一生。第二， 一些劇烈的極端運動會成為暴力的借口。例如, 拳擊比賽含有太多的暴力和血腥, 對于年輕人有不良的影響, 例如誘發(fā)他們的施虐沖動。

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Personally, I encourage the extreme adventures, for it is a symbol of freedom, so it is citizens' elementary right to opt for his or her favorite sports activities. Efforts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making, however, to prevent accident and injury is highly recommended. (52)

翻譯：個人而言, 我十分鼓勵極限運動，這是自由的象征，這是公民的基本權利選擇自己喜歡的運動。我們應該努力保證運動的刺激，有趣和盈利，但是, 采取措施去預防受傷和意外又是高度推薦的。

點評：尾段亮明立場，針對弊端再提出解決策略，觀點無懈可擊。

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