托福寫作：考生應(yīng)避免的25種病句（1）

下面25句句子是考生常寫的一些病句，我們特地為考生進(jìn)行了改正，希望考生注意這方面的錯(cuò)誤。

1. I am not good at maths, but English

改進(jìn): I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

改進(jìn): Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

3.It is children who clear about their interests.

改進(jìn): It is children who are clear about their own interests.

4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介詞是大家在托福寫作中低分的常見(jiàn)病句。)

改進(jìn): I agree with the latter idea.

5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

改進(jìn): Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

改進(jìn): So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(語(yǔ)義重復(fù)也是大家在托福寫作中導(dǎo)致低分的主要原因)

改進(jìn)：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

8. No one knows all the things.

改進(jìn): No one knows everything.

9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

改進(jìn): I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

改進(jìn): Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

改進(jìn): I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

改進(jìn): Luckily, he knew an American professor.

13. They will learn the bad habits.

改進(jìn): They will develop bad habits.

14. In this continued process, people make progress.

改進(jìn): In this cycle, people make progress.

15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

改進(jìn): Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

改進(jìn): By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

改進(jìn): A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

改進(jìn): You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

改進(jìn): Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

20. I felt alone.

21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

改進(jìn): The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

改進(jìn): Cigarettes can help you relax.

23. What’s about nonsmokers?

改進(jìn): What about nonsmokers?

24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改進(jìn): Why not be a non-smoker?

25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

改進(jìn): Everyone has friends in his life.

上面這些錯(cuò)誤是考生導(dǎo)致低分的主要原因，考生為了防止自己做無(wú)用功，一定要在考前多檢查自己的作文，也可以讓別人幫你一起看，這樣你就知道你的弱點(diǎn)在哪里了。