積累托福詞匯,托福寫作中寫出地道英語。有人更是戲說道,老外眼中句子分為3個(gè)檔次,最差的是主動句,較好的是被動句,倒裝句等,最好的nominalization(名詞化)的句子,這樣的句子最適合寫論文。那么面對這樣的差異,我們需要重新審視我們寫作中的思維方式,做到如何恰到好處又不“畫蛇添足”。
積累托福詞匯,托福寫作中寫出地道英語。有人更是戲說道,老外眼中句子分為3個(gè)檔次,最差的是主動句,較好的是被動句,倒裝句等,最好的nominalization(名詞化)的句子,這樣的句子最適合寫論文。那么面對這樣的差異,我們需要重新審視我們寫作中的思維方式,做到如何恰到好處又不“畫蛇添足”。
簡單說,名詞化即是動詞或形容詞被用作名詞的現(xiàn)象。比如動詞轉(zhuǎn)成名詞:discovery->;discovery, move->;movement, refuse->;refusal,又比如形容詞轉(zhuǎn)成名詞:careless->;carelessness, difficult->;difficulty, intense->;intensity。那么什么情況下,我們需要進(jìn)行名詞化呢?
A 謂語動詞的賓語部分
原句:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.
名詞化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.
B 結(jié)合被動形式
原句:If people decide without enough persuasive information,...
名詞化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information,...
C 取代諸如從句中“the fact that”的用法
原句:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.
名詞化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.
更好的名詞化:a. When I denied his accusations, I impressed the jury.
b. In denying his accusations, I impressed the jury.
D 名詞化部分用在there is/are的后面
原句:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.
名詞化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.
原句:The floods considerably eroded the land.
名詞化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.
然而,有些時(shí)候,在我們的思維方式中認(rèn)為理所應(yīng)當(dāng)使用“名詞化”時(shí),老外認(rèn)為是沒有必要的。比如:
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A 名詞化部分跟在動詞后面
原句(名詞化“冗余”):The police conducted an investigation into the matter.
改后:The police investigated the matter.
B 名詞化部分作為主語
原句:Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.
改后:We discussed a tax cut.
C 連續(xù)進(jìn)行名詞化
原句:a. First, she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.
b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.
改后:First, she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.
D 連接部分名詞化
原句:Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.
改后:They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.
原句:The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.
改后:Even though the motor housing was unstable, the research staff completed the field trials.
在保證基本的語言語法不出錯(cuò)的基礎(chǔ)上,托福寫作中如果能更多地正確使用名詞化,文章不但更地道,也更易取得高分。當(dāng)然,應(yīng)當(dāng)多加進(jìn)行托福寫作練習(xí),熟練掌握名詞化不是一蹴而就的事情,平時(shí)需要多積累,多運(yùn)用。
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