ETC考官托福寫作滿分樣文

對于網上流傳的“滿分樣文”，某些文章語言的確贊賞有加，但是思路和文章結構卻與滿分有差距。其實，ETS從來沒有公布過滿分文章的規(guī)范寫法，也就是說：新托福獨立寫作是沒有“范文的”，我們可以看到的也許僅僅是獲取滿分不充分條件的“樣文”。

托福獨立寫作段落數量必須為五段話：

托幅獨立寫作必須寫到300個單詞，如果少于這個數目會扣分；

寫作語言要長短句結合（問題是：我們怎么定義長句子、短句子？）；

托福寫作需要讓步，體現考生的思辨思維；

托福寫作句子越長越好，長句子體現了考生過硬的語法功底；

托福寫作不能使用口語化的句子和詞匯，必須使用正式的書面語言。

為了更好地同學們學習托福寫作，小編特意找來被ETS認可的一位考官的滿分獨立寫作附下，并且標記一些可以思考的寫作套路：

題目：Do you agree or disagree: nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.

考官滿分樣文（部分）

The statement tries to tell us that, compared with the past, students living today are less likely to revere the faculties in school. (重述考題信息) A quick reflection towards our life, many common occurrences in education jump into our mind: Due to the limitations, many teachers are incapable of teaching much latest information to students; due to insufficient experiences on marketing, the professors responsible for teaching Marketing Principles could become less competent to present lectures with amounts of valuable information.(列舉一些與我觀點相反的事實) However, based on my personal study, I am holding an opposite view, believing that student, whether those studying in high schools or pursing academia in colleges or universities, are more likely to respect teachers, not less so.（給出我的觀點。大家可以思考：我為什么會在句子中間插入whether… universities的論述呢？這也是考官眼里認為合格的開頭段需要具備的特點。）

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Take the students in high school for example: because of the increasing difficulty in exams, the students in school will be more dependent on teachers’ help to tackle these tough questions, which indicates that they will surely respect teachers much more. (這是第一個分論點。你是不是覺得有點蹊蹺：為什么第一句話是一個例子？)Let’s assume the math exams in high school: in contrast of past tests, the math exams today are equipped with more complex problems to solve, like sets understanding, plane geometry cracking and so forth. And this means that the students in high school cannot ace these questions by themselves alone. Rather, the assistance from teachers outshines: intensive training before exams and the online courses through the internet. In light of this phenomenon, how could these teenagers be less likely to respect teachers? (這是證明分論點的事實，這個語言完全符合滿分的fully developed. 你能找到足夠具體的細節(jié)嗎？)Another case in mind: students who want to pass the English exams in school could also rely more on teachers, since the requirements of English learning are far more demanding. Compared with past, today’s learning English includes pronunciation skills, oral communications and even the paper writings. （這個細節(jié)一定要有）Therefore, it is hard for us to imagine the students without guidance from teachers will achieve ideal scores on these kinds of tests.

大家可以思考這段話：所列舉的事實是不是非常“深奧”？段落中的“increasing difficulty in exams”是如何在后文進一步探討的，又提出了哪些考試來證明呢？大家會發(fā)現，段落字數雖然不少，但其實一直圍繞第一句話來展開的。換言之，文章沒有論述第一句信息之外的內容。這就是考官所認為的“well-organized”和“unity”。你看，如果我們大家不知道托福考官需要你寫什么，你還會糾結自己每周需要練習幾篇文章嗎？這就是為什么練習的數量多少與得分沒有必然關系的理由所在。 

寫到這里，小編最后給大家推薦一些好的“樣文”來源：

你所讀的文章本身就是他人的習作：所以請仔細閱讀托福真題中的閱讀文章吧！

新托福官方指南上考官所給的樣文；

大家可以參考老托福185道題目所附的高分學員樣文；

大家可以參考一些經典的海外寫作書籍，比如美國大學英語寫作等。里面很多段落寫作和寫作原理完全適用于托福獨立寫作。

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