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過而能改:托福寫作病句一覽

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新托福寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)比較高,在語言上的考察點(diǎn)也是非常多而雜,所以大家對于新托?荚囋谡Z言上的考察一定要有足夠的重視,尤其是一些常見的錯(cuò)誤,大家更要注意予以避免。詳細(xì)資訊歡迎來電! 免費(fèi)咨詢電話:400-618-0272

新托福寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)比較高,在語言上的考察點(diǎn)也是非常多而雜,所以大家對于新托?荚囋谡Z言上的考察一定要有足夠的重視,尤其是一些常見的錯(cuò)誤,大家更要注意予以避免。

大家在托福寫作中經(jīng)常會犯一些錯(cuò)誤,除了不斷的練習(xí)外,大家也要善于修改自己的作文,不斷完善自己的寫作。本文為大家總結(jié)一些大家在新托福作文中容易犯的錯(cuò)誤,供大家參考。

托福寫作中的一些句型錯(cuò)誤屢見不鮮,考生需要注意不要用錯(cuò)句型犯一些低級錯(cuò)誤,謹(jǐn)記在作文中想要提高和有所突破,打好基礎(chǔ)是大前提。

大家想要在新托福作文考試中取得好成績,除了不斷練習(xí)以外,還需要對自己的作文進(jìn)行修改,并且不斷總結(jié)。本文為大家例舉了一些在大家的作文中經(jīng)常會出現(xiàn)的病句,大家對照自己的作文進(jìn)行修改。

新托福作文中如果出現(xiàn)出病句,對大家想要在新托福寫作中取得好成績的影響是很大的 。下面例舉的50個(gè)病句是考生們在完成新托福作文時(shí)經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的,我們一起來看看修改后的句子,避免犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。

托福考試的作文中,大家普遍都會出現(xiàn)“病句”的問題,大家在平時(shí)一定要養(yǎng)成為自己的文章進(jìn)行修改的習(xí)慣。本文為大家例舉了十三句托福作文的病句以及改進(jìn)后的句子,大家可以參考一下。

考生在寫作時(shí),時(shí)常會寫一些錯(cuò)誤的句子,自己都不自覺,下面就為大家羅列了25種中國考生常會犯的一些錯(cuò)誤,特別是介詞的使用上,考生一定要留心。

因?yàn)橹袊蜌W美國家的思維方式的區(qū)別,考生在寫作時(shí),常會出現(xiàn)中國式英語,有些詞匯雖然有你想要表達(dá)的意思,但是在歐美國家,他們并不會使用這種方式來表達(dá)某些意思,考生一定要注意這方面的問題。

大陸語系與歐美語系在本質(zhì)上有很大的不同,考生會在寫作中寫出許多中國式英語,下面就為大家羅列了25種考生會犯的錯(cuò)誤,并將它們一一改正過來,希望對考生有幫助。

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托福寫作:病句大作戰(zhàn)

新托福寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)比較高,在語言上的考察點(diǎn)也是非常多而雜,所以大家對于新托?荚囋谡Z言上的考察一定要有足夠的重視,尤其是一些常見的錯(cuò)誤,大家更要注意予以避免。

造句要做到準(zhǔn)確、多樣以及高分表達(dá)

I 準(zhǔn)確的句子表達(dá)

1. 句型分析

英語的句型包括以下幾種,簡單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫作中,一般使用復(fù)合句,輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句,當(dāng)然肯定要有簡單句,做到長短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。

a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

這句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句,由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。

b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

這句話中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中,有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句對result進(jìn)行解釋說明。

c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

上句話是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子,是一個(gè)并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。

d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個(gè)句子,成為并列句,再一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

2. 有問題的句子的列舉

考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問題:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接連句,三是句子連接不正確。

1). 破碎句

所謂破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是沒有謂語(或者說謂語是動詞的非謂語形式,如分詞),或者是從句單獨(dú)成句。

破碎句:She singing alone. (無謂語,singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)

正確句:She is singing alone.

破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨(dú)成句)

正確句:He did not come because he was sick.

2).接連句

所謂接連據(jù),就是兩個(gè)句子直接連在一起,既未使用連詞,也未使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號。

接連句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

3).句子連接不正確

所謂句子連接不正確,就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子之間以逗號連接,這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號、冒號、句號等連接兩個(gè)句子。

不正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

II 高分表達(dá)

除了在句式上長短句相結(jié)合準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)外,新通海外考試研究中心建議新托?忌褂靡恍┨厥獾木涫,以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一。除了我們之前經(jīng)常提到的高分句式,如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、狀語前置、插入語等,筆者還提出另外一個(gè)句式的多樣變化,即主語多樣化。下面筆者將列舉幾個(gè)句子概括介紹前面四種句型,而重點(diǎn)分析主語多樣化。

正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.

倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定詞位于句首的倒裝。)

正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.

強(qiáng)調(diào)句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強(qiáng)調(diào)the internet)

正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

狀語前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.

正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.

插入語: New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語)

主語多樣

1. 她突然想到了一個(gè)主意。

She suddenly had an idea.

通常情況下,考生會馬上對這句話進(jìn)行翻譯,基本不會動句子結(jié)構(gòu)。但是以人作為主語的英語句子總是不能夠很吸引人,所以這個(gè)句子如果稍微做下修改,以后面的賓語“主意”做主語,這個(gè)句子會發(fā)生一些變化。

An idea suddenly occurred to her.

2. 他開車心不在焉,幾乎闖禍。

He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.

這句話依然是拿人做主語,稍微改一下,把心不在焉這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式做主語,會大不相同。

His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.

3. 美利堅(jiān)合眾國創(chuàng)立于1789年。

The United States of America was founded in 1789.

這句話沒有任何錯(cuò)誤,但是不夠多樣,可以用時(shí)間作主語。

The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.

III 實(shí)用句型

在文章的最后,新通海外考試研究中心為大家列舉幾個(gè)新托?荚囍锌梢允褂玫奶子镁湫,為一些寫句子摸不著頭緒的考生提供幫助。

1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.

努力準(zhǔn)備新托?荚囀侵档玫。

2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

沒有比接受教育更重要的了。

3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.

白領(lǐng)壓力日益增加的原因是他們在事業(yè)上有所追求。

4. It is time the related department took proper measures.

(虛擬句式)相關(guān)部門早該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┝恕?/p>

以上是托福寫作教你怎樣造句的內(nèi)容,一篇好的文章是由一個(gè)個(gè)句子堆砌起來的,每一句話都是這篇文章的重點(diǎn)我們?nèi)f萬不可忽視,在這里面不僅僅體現(xiàn)了考生的語法用詞,還能體現(xiàn)考生對于題目的思路看法,以及對美國地道用語的運(yùn)用。

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托福寫作問題句改進(jìn)50例

托福寫作中的一些句型錯(cuò)誤屢見不鮮,一些考生光顧著背誦經(jīng)典句來加分,但是大家不能忽略打好基礎(chǔ)的重要性,情愿少一些華麗的辭藻,也要注意不要用錯(cuò)句型犯一些低級錯(cuò)誤,謹(jǐn)記在作文中想要提高和有所突破,打好基礎(chǔ)是大前提,之后再考慮修飾問題。

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

改進(jìn):Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

2. For example, you work in a big factory。

改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory。

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

改進(jìn):You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life。

6. Their brain is still very young。

改進(jìn): They are still immature。

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong。

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。

改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time。

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life。

改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development。

改進(jìn): Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development。

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。

改進(jìn): The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。

改進(jìn): They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。

14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money。

改進(jìn): Some cigarettes may cost even more。

15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products。

改進(jìn): Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products。

16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills。

改進(jìn): Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills。

17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians。

改進(jìn): Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand。

18. This knowledge will become a part of your body。

改進(jìn): This knowledge will become part of you。

19. They cannot think clearly。

改進(jìn): They cannot think straight。

20. Money can improve their living standard。

改進(jìn): Money can improve their life。

21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money。

改進(jìn): Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money。

22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life。

改進(jìn): If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life。

23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later。

改進(jìn): One purpose of education is to learn to learn。

24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano。

改進(jìn): Many parents send their children to piano classes。

25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others。

改進(jìn): When I need second opinion, I will study with others。

26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing。

改進(jìn): The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal。

27. Smoking can help you relax your mind。

改進(jìn): Cigarettes can help you relax。

28. What's about nonsmokers?

改進(jìn): What about nonsmokers?

29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改進(jìn): Why not be a non-smoker?

30. Everyone will have many friends in his life。

改進(jìn): Everyone has friends in his life。

31. I am not good at maths,but English

改進(jìn): I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English。

32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

改進(jìn): Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

33.It is children who clear about their interests。

改進(jìn): It is children who are clear about their own interests。

34. I agree the latter idea。

改進(jìn): I agree with the latter idea。

35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo。

改進(jìn): Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo。

36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now。

改進(jìn): So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe。

37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are。

改進(jìn):People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn。

38. No one knows all the things。

改進(jìn): No one knows everything。

39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life。

改進(jìn): I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life。

40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages。

改進(jìn): Each way of choosing friends has its advantages。

41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up。

改進(jìn): I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply。

42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor。

改進(jìn): Luckily, he knew an American professor。

43. They will learn the bad habits。

改進(jìn): They will develop bad habits。

44. In this continued process, people make progress。

改進(jìn): In this cycle, people make progress。

45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary。

改進(jìn): Lastly, higher education means higher salary。

46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency。

改進(jìn): By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings。

47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact。

改進(jìn): A wrong decision will bring even worse result。

48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing。

改進(jìn): You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream。

49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost。

改進(jìn): Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss。

50. I felt alone。

改進(jìn): I felt lonely。

以上就是托福寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問題,一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體,任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。以上語句中的出現(xiàn)的常見錯(cuò)誤,希望考生能夠避免。為了文章的華麗偏用一些另類語句會出彩,但是若寫作中有問題,可是得不償失。

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新托?荚囎魑闹谐R姷50例病句(上)

新托福作文中如果出現(xiàn)出病句,對大家想要在新托福寫作中取得好成績的影響是很大的 。下面例舉的50個(gè)病句是考生們在完成新托福作文時(shí)經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的,我們一起來看看修改后的句子,避免犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改進(jìn):Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改進(jìn):You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改進(jìn): They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改進(jìn):Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

改進(jìn): Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

改進(jìn): The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

改進(jìn): They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

改進(jìn): Some cigarettes may cost even more.

15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

改進(jìn): Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.

改進(jìn): Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

改進(jìn): Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

改進(jìn): This knowledge will become part of you.

19. They cannot think clearly.

改進(jìn): They cannot think straight.

20. Money can improve their living standard.

改進(jìn): Money can improve their life.

21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

改進(jìn): Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

改進(jìn): If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

改進(jìn): One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

改進(jìn): Many parents send their children to piano classes.

25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

改進(jìn):When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

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新托?荚囎魑闹谐R姷50例病句(下)

新托福作文中如果出現(xiàn)出病句,對大家想要在新托福寫作中取得好成績的影響是很大的 。下面例舉的50個(gè)病句是考生們在完成新托福作文時(shí)經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的,我們一起來看看修改后的句子,避免犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。

26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

改進(jìn): The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

改進(jìn): Cigarettes can help you relax.

28. What's about nonsmokers?

改進(jìn): What about nonsmokers?

29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改進(jìn): Why not be a non-smoker?

30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

改進(jìn): Everyone has friends in his life.

31. I am not good at maths, but English.

改進(jìn): I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

改進(jìn): Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

33.It is children who clear about their interests.

改進(jìn): It is children who are clear about their own interests.

34. I agree the latter idea.

改進(jìn): I agree with the latter idea.

35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

改進(jìn): Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

改進(jìn): So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

改進(jìn):People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

38. No one knows all the things.

改進(jìn): No one knows everything.

39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

改進(jìn): I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

改進(jìn): Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

改進(jìn): I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

改進(jìn): Luckily, he knew an American professor.

43. They will learn the bad habits.

改進(jìn): They will develop bad habits.

44. In this continued process, people make progress.

改進(jìn): In this cycle, people make progress.

45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

改進(jìn): Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

改進(jìn): By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

改進(jìn): A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

改進(jìn): You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

改進(jìn): Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

50. I felt alone.

改進(jìn): I felt lonely.

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即日起——7月31日

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托?荚囎魑某R姴【浼案倪M(jìn)

1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改進(jìn):Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改進(jìn):You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改進(jìn): They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

改進(jìn): Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

改進(jìn): The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

改進(jìn): They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

   撥打免費(fèi)電話400-618-0272,咨詢托福疑難。

 

即日起——7月31日

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考生應(yīng)避免的25種病句(一)

下面25句句子是考生常寫的一些病句,我們特地為考生進(jìn)行了改正,希望考生注意這方面的錯(cuò)誤。

1. I am not good at maths, but English

改進(jìn): I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

改進(jìn): Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

3.It is children who clear about their interests.

改進(jìn): It is children who are clear about their own interests.

4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介詞是大家在托福寫作中低分的常見病句。)

改進(jìn): I agree with the latter idea.

5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

改進(jìn): Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

改進(jìn): So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(語義重復(fù)也是大家在托福寫作中導(dǎo)致低分的主要原因)

改進(jìn):People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

8. No one knows all the things.

改進(jìn): No one knows everything.

9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

改進(jìn): I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

改進(jìn): Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

改進(jìn): I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

改進(jìn): Luckily, he knew an American professor.

13. They will learn the bad habits.

改進(jìn): They will develop bad habits.

14. In this continued process, people make progress.

改進(jìn): In this cycle, people make progress.

15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

改進(jìn): Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

改進(jìn): By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

改進(jìn): A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

改進(jìn): You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

改進(jìn): Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

20. I felt alone.

21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

改進(jìn): The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

改進(jìn): Cigarettes can help you relax.

23. What’s about nonsmokers?

改進(jìn): What about nonsmokers?

24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改進(jìn): Why not be a non-smoker?

25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

改進(jìn): Everyone has friends in his life.

上面這些錯(cuò)誤是考生導(dǎo)致低分的主要原因,考生為了防止自己做無用功,一定要在考前多檢查自己的作文,也可以讓別人幫你一起看,這樣你就知道你的弱點(diǎn)在哪里了。

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1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改進(jìn):Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.(這個(gè)病句在托福寫作中出現(xiàn)的很多。)

改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改進(jìn):You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.(這個(gè)病句在托福寫作中出現(xiàn)的很多。)

改進(jìn): They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

改進(jìn): Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

改進(jìn): The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

改進(jìn): They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

改進(jìn): Some cigarettes may cost even more.

15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

改進(jìn): Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.

改進(jìn): Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

改進(jìn): Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

改進(jìn): This knowledge will become part of you.

19. They cannot think clearly.

改進(jìn): They cannot think straight.

20. Money can improve their living standard.

改進(jìn): Money can improve their life.

21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

改進(jìn): Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

改進(jìn): If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

改進(jìn): One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.(這種典型的中式思維的病句在托福寫作中出現(xiàn)的很多。)

改進(jìn): Many parents send their children to piano classes.

25. When I want to absorb somebody else’s opinion, I will study with others.

改進(jìn): When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

考生可以發(fā)現(xiàn)有些病句,如果我們不提出來,考生自己是很難發(fā)現(xiàn)有問題,所以考生最好多結(jié)合這次的病句對自己的文章進(jìn)行一次大檢查。

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考生應(yīng)避免的25種病句(三)

大陸語系與歐美語系在本質(zhì)上有很大的不同,考生會在寫作中寫出許多中國式英語,下面就為大家羅列了25種考生會犯的錯(cuò)誤,并將它們一一改正過來,希望對考生有幫助。

1. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

改進(jìn): The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

2. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

改進(jìn): Cigarettes can help you relax.

3. What's about nonsmokers?

改進(jìn): What about nonsmokers?

4. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改進(jìn): Why not be a non-smoker?

5. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

改進(jìn): Everyone has friends in his life.

6. I am not good at maths, but English.

改進(jìn): I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

7. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

改進(jìn): Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

8.It is children who clear about their interests.

改進(jìn): It is children who are clear about their own interests.

9. I agree the latter idea.

改進(jìn): I agree with the latter idea.

10. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

改進(jìn): Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

11. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

改進(jìn): So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

12. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

改進(jìn):People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

13. No one knows all the things.

改進(jìn): No one knows everything.

14. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

改進(jìn): I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

15. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

改進(jìn): Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

16. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

改進(jìn): I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

17. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

改進(jìn): Luckily, he knew an American professor.

18. They will learn the bad habits.

改進(jìn): They will develop bad habits.

19. In this continued process, people make progress.

改進(jìn): In this cycle, people make progress.

20. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

改進(jìn): Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

21. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

改進(jìn): By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

22. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

改進(jìn): A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

23. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

改進(jìn): You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

24. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

改進(jìn): Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

25. I felt alone.

改進(jìn): I felt lonely.

考生可以發(fā)現(xiàn)有些病句,如果我們不提出來,考生自己是很難發(fā)現(xiàn)有問題,所以考生最好多結(jié)合這次的病句對自己的文章進(jìn)行一次大檢查。

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