2014年6月15日 托福獨立作文范文+解析

2014.6.15 托福獨立寫作題目
　　Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as they are available to the public. Others people prefer to wait until many people have used them. Which do you prefer?

2014.6.15 托福寫作題目分析
　　題型為比較類；論點為讓步；角度可從利弊分析入手。

開頭：選擇等待很多人用了之后再買。（話題引入+他人觀點+明確立場+過渡句）

With the unprecedented progress of science and technology, various technological devices keep emerging one after another, and meanwhile, the same type of product undergoes more rapid iterations. This trend divides people into two kinds: the first kind is apt to purchase what comes out immediately whereas the other kind waits till the product is widely used. Personally speaking, I am the latter kind of people who are conservative in buying things. There are a couple of reasons and examples that support my viewpoint. （83字）

中間段1：新出來的產(chǎn)品功能不完善，過一段時間等功能完善了再買會比較明智。（主題句+解釋說明+細節(jié)例子）

Firstly, it is wise to buy the device later when its deficiencies get fixed. It is because when a new technological device is available to the public for the first time, there may well be several inconspicuous imperfections existing in it. With the growing number of users reporting the problems to the manufacturers, the following version is bound to be better than its predecessor. Taking iPhone4 for example, this product suffered sharp criticism over signal-receiving problems caused by its poorly-design antenna. After rounds of adjustments, the later versions of iPhone4 gradually became stable in function and earned its worldwide reputation. （100字）

中間段2：新出來的產(chǎn)品價格普遍比較高，等一段時間后價格會回歸理性。（主題句+解釋說明+細節(jié)例子）

Secondly,the price of a newly launched technological device is relatively higher, which means the quality-price ratio is not satisfactory when people buy it at the very beginning. According to laws of economics, when popular device is firstly brought to the market, the supply falls short of demand, which results in a higher price than its real value, but after a period of time, the price will return to a reasonable level. For example, the initial price for Surface, a product by Microsoft, was set at around $600 that is unaffordable to most people. 3 month later, the price was cut down to $300 that is much more reasonable.（109字）

讓步段：剛開始就去買也有好處，比如可以第一時間享受新科技帶來的新體驗，但是等很多人用之后再去買，產(chǎn)品的體驗會更好，現(xiàn)在產(chǎn)品更新速度太快了，每次都買無異于浪費金錢。（承認漏洞+堵漏）

It is true that buying technological devices as soon as they are available can have a benefit that is to experience the latest technology way earlier than the rest people. However, if we can buy them after a certain amount of time, the experience will be better because lots of drawbacks have already been removed. Besides, the modern technological devices are changing rapidly. Buying a new device every time it comes out is no different to a big waste of money.（80字）

結(jié)尾：重申觀點+歸納理由/升華主題

To put it in a nutshell, I prefer to buy a technological device after many people begin to use them. As an old saying goes, good things are worth waiting. Facing a new fascinating technological device, we are advised to wait until the price comes down and the quality becomes better.（51字）

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