寫作牛師教你寫地道托福作文

托福作文改如何寫？我們知道托�？荚嚨木碜涌墒墙o外國人看得，所以我們的作文要寫的地道才有可能得高分。接下來給同學(xué)們舉例說明一下作文該如何寫。

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1. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
　　改進(jìn): Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

2. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
　　改進(jìn): The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

3. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
　　改進(jìn): They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

4. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
　　改進(jìn): Some cigarettes may cost even more.

5. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
　　改進(jìn): Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

6. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
　　改進(jìn): In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

7. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
　　改進(jìn): Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

8. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
　　改進(jìn): This knowledge will become part of you.

9. They cannot think clearly.
　　改進(jìn): They cannot think straight.

10. Money can improve their living standard.
　　改進(jìn): Money can improve their life.

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